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What change needs to be made to this sentence - Only a very few teens say that using social media has a negative effect on how they feel about themselfs; many more say it has a positive effect.
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What change need to be made in this sentence - (2) Young adults with few responsibilities other than college courses, organizational issues, and maybe a few hours of work to earn spending money be becoming a shrinking demographic on many college campuses
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(3) Part of this effort including the first federal implementation of a school lunch program.
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(2) The study, done in partnership with The Dallas Morning News, finds that Dallas voters between the ages of 23 and 35 was more likely to participate in certain local races if they had been targeted by internet ads promoting election news coverage and election reminders.
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(4) Teens should have been giving this earlier form of music recording a chance and experience vinyl records for themselves.
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What needs to be changed in this sentence - In 2012, about half of all teens still said their favorite way to communicate with friends were in person; today less than a third say so.
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(2) The making of copper tools initiated a spectacular growth in human technology being instrumental in the birth of other technologies, cities, and the first great civilizations
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(1) Gone are visions of idyllic childhoods spent frolicking in fields and playing in pastures for many kids, green grass has been replaced with smartphone screens.
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(1) This study looks at the relationship between screen time and depression and suicide rates in 506,820 adolescants in the U.S. between 2010 and 2015.
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(12) You might ask, “how can music be about something other than music?”
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In 1961 Professor Richmond from Oxford University discovered a pit that had been dug by the Romans in AD 89.
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(3) The pyramids of Egypt are an example of what became possible once there were lavish copper tools.
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Which of the following should replace To illustrate in this sentence?
A Such as B Specifically C In fact D Of course
(2) To illustrate, recent research finds that 63% of kids in the U.S. spend over two hours a day on recreational screen time.
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(3) Suicide rates were calculated from national statistics collected by the Centers for Disease Control and Prevention Fatal Injury Reports.
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(15) Plastered with large gorgeous artwork, the cover of a vinyl record is something to be appreciated and admired.
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(8) The legion of five thousand men occupied the region for six years before retreating and, in the process, abandoning their fort. (9) You made great efforts to leave behind nothing that could help their enemies. (10) They smashed all food and drink containers and burned the fort to the ground.
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(1) Group culture is one of the most powerful forces on the Planet.
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(5) Many are first-generation college students whose parents have not attended college and are not providing the students with firsthand information about the inner workings of collage.
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(4) The aim of this paper is to highlight the role of Twitter during Hurricane Sandy (2012) to spread fake images about the disaster. (5) They identified 10,350 unique tweets containing fake images that were circulated on Twitter during Hurricane Sandy. (6) We performed a characterization analysis, to understand the temporal, social reputation, and influence patterns for the spread of fake images.
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(22) Such a prolonged and expensive endeaver most likely would be undertaken only by someone who sees the value in this type of recording.
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What spelling correction is needed in sentence 12 - (12) In the ashes were the steel nails that had held the fort together, and they were far to valuable to be left to the tribes that had driven them out.
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(1) The great depression greatly exacerbated and highlighted the depths of hunger in America.
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(5) The ubiquity of screens and their prominence in everyday life has drawn criticism and concerns, with microsoft veteran and philanthropist Melinda Gates writing about not being “prepared for smartphones and social media” as a parent and news headlines questioning whether smartphones have “destroyed a generation.”
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(1) Decade’s ago vinyl records provided music lovers with a way to enjoy recorded music.
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(22) I cannot imagine that a concert at Carnegie hall would have been any better
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