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Rawr!
Arf! Arf!
Meow!
Oink! Oink!
Neigh!
100
Thesis: "My favorite art form is music."

Topic Sentence: "First, if we listen to music, we feel calm."

Is the topic sentence combined with details?
No
100
An IE level student wrote 5 body paragraphs. The first two topic setnences are irrelevant, but the last three are good ones. What should be the grade in Substance - Topic Sentence?
Check Again
100
The topic question asks for more than one way to solve violence.

Thesis: "To solve violence, we should put up posters, make announcements and make laws."

Topic sentence: "First, when we put up posters, people will be more aware that violence must be stopped."

How will you address this topic sentence?
Improper topic sentence (the student should have stated what was in the predictor, not give a reason for it)
100
What is the exact date Chungdahm Philippines, Inc. opened office?
September 29, 2008
100
Thesis: "I agree that women and children should be saved first."

First: "Women are weak."

Second: "Men are strong."

What is wrong with these sentences?
The second topic sentence has indirect reasoning.
200
What are the student programs Chungdahm Philippines, Inc. handles?
Essay Writing
Summary Writing
April Writing
Critical Speaking
Internet-Based TOEFL
English Bean
ESLifestyle
200
How does one commit circular reasoning errors? Give an example.
Supporting one opinion with the same opinion
200
What should be addressed first, an indirect reasoning issue or an over-generalization issue?
Indirect reasoning
200
Thesis: "My favorite art form is painting."

First: "It is very artistic."

What is wrong with these sentences?
The topic sentence has circular reasoning.
200
What check would you make for this topic sentence:

"The second reason is he invented Hangul, which is the official language now of Korea."
none
300
The topic sentence states “my mother is good at cooking and she knows how to cook well, so she is my personal hero.” What is the error?
Missing transition + combined with details
300
Is the topic sentence in this paragraph combined with supporting details?

"First, we should put the computer in an open space, like the living room. This is because the living room is accessible to many people and it is used often so parents can see their children using the computer."
No
300
How many body paragraphs are present in the essay?

"When I have a free plane ticket to the Amazon rain forest , I was not go to there. Because, I think there are very scared. and there are very hot and only has many tree. I was very, very hate a bug, or reptilia(like a sanke). But in Amazon rain forest, but and reptilia is very many. I think it was a nasty... Finally, I like a trip, but there was not safe place. and when I alone, It was very danger. I like a most animal and plants, but suitable to trip. It´s a exploration. So I was not want to go to there."
Four
300
Exact and full address of Chungdahm Philippines, Inc.
23rd Floor, Tower 1, The Enterprise Center, 6766 Ayala Avenue cor. Paseo de Roxas Street, Makati City, Philippines
300
Give 5 different kinds of topic sentence checks.
Not a complete sentence (ex. “First, dogs.”)
Irrelevant to the thesis statement (not to the topic question)
Too specific
Two ideas
Combined with Details
Same ideas
Indirect reasoning
Missing/improper transition
400
Identify the topic sentences in this essay:

"i want have a lot of time with children because i like perents and they help me all the time so i choose that then perents are good for me because they give me a food and also pay alot of money for us next they loves me all the time when i happy and sad and mad but they likes me all the time so i like them i think when they not live with me my heart is broken to sad so i want to live a lot of time with my perents my main choose is have a lot of time to spend with their children"
1. i like perents and they help me all the time
2. perents are good for me
3. they loves me all the time
4. i think when they not live with me my heart is broken to sad
400
What is the best attack for these body paragraphs:

"I think when I go to the Amazon I can see the amazing animals or things, and it have nice lanscapes, and at night it is dark so I can sleep very well.

But when I go to there there are many scary animals, it have only 20 percents oxygen, and at night it will cold because of canopy, and at night many scary and noisy sound of animals."
(missing transition +) more than one idea + no details
400
"Lastly, Barack Obama and Martin Luther King made significant contributions to society. Barack Obama is the first African-American President of the USA and he is making great changes to the health system of his country. This will help the poor people who cannot afford hospitalization."

How will you treat the topic sentence?
Two ideas
400
What is the Korean name of Mr. Paul Hong.
Mr. Hong Won Ki
400
How would you address this essay?

Topic Question: "What is a serious problem in your city and what are some effective solutions for it?"

Essay: "Different cities have their own problems. A serious problem in my city is overpopulation. To solve this, we should educate people and give them jobs.

First, we should educate people.

Second, we should give them jobs.

Third, by doing these to things, people would be able to create their own solution for the problem.

In conclusion, we should educate people and give them jobs to solve overpopulation, the biggest problem in my city. Let us all do our part."
The third topic sentence is improper (similar ideas to the first two BPs)
500
Identify the topic sentence in this paragraph:

"Because the rich parents is so busy, and didn´t time talk for the their children.
But I think their did make a spend time for children.
And their need have a lot of spend with their children. other parents are so bust too, but their has some spend time with their children.
children really want to talk with their parents."
"Children really want to talk to their parents."
500
Identify the parts of the essay:

"I prefer rich parents beacuse when it is very rich I´d like to buy everthing to chlidren. And I canbe not tired because I can be awayt from children so i´d like to be a rich man And when got very old this mopney goes to the children so I´d like to be a rich man. A poor man is also very happy. These reasons are why I want to be a rich man for these three reasons so i want to be a rich man."
no hook
thesis: "I prefer rich parents"
TS1: "when it is very rich I´d like to buy everthing to chlidren."
No SD1
TS2: "I canbe not tired"
SD2: "I can be awayt from children so i´d like to be a rich man"
Extra TS: "And when got very old this mopney goes to the children"
Restatement: "These reasons are why I want to be a rich man for these three reasons so i want to be a rich man."
FT: "A poor man is also very happy."
500
As a group, do the Chungdahm cheer. (All or nothing)
Audience, is it worth 500 points?
500
The entire body paragraph talks about the future effects of cutting down trees in the Amazon rain forest ("First, if we cut them down, the air in the Amazon rainforest will be bad. And, there will be many landslides and we will not have any more food.") What kind of check will you do for this error?
Relevant and Proper Topic Sentences (more than one idea) or Relevant and Proper Supporting Details (irrelevant details)
500
Which is an irrelevant topic sentence?

Topic Question: People have different wishes. What is your biggest wish? Why? Write a four-paragraph essay, giving two reasons to support your answer.

Thesis statement: My greatest wish is to have a big house.

a) "First, because i want to play with my cousins in a huge house."
b) "I want my mother to be proud of me."
c) "First of all, I will work hard to achieve this."
d) None of the above
c