Essay Componets
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It has 4 to 5 paragraphs
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imagine a worll without cel phones 4 corrections
Imagine a world without cell phones!
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Write a hook: about cell phones in school
Life is over without my cell phone in school!
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Write a thesis: topic= death penalty/ claim= against it/ 2 supporting points= might kill an innocent man & against religious views.
The death penalty should be abolished because innocent men have been wrongly killed and it goes against religious viewpoints.
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The thesis
What is the most important sentence of the essay because it gives the direction and focus of the essay.
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Introduction, Supporting and Conclusion
What is the names of the paragraphs in an essay.
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this sandwich ain't good 3 corrections
This sandwich isn't good!
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Write a hook: about not being able to drive until age 21.
Imagine walking 50 miles a day!
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Write a thesis: topic= rap music/ claim= against it/ 2 supporting points= negatively portrays women & promotes drugs and violence.
Rap music leaves a bad taste in my mouth because it negatively portrays women and it gloifies drug usage and violence.
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the prompt
What is the first thing you read because you have to answer it in the essay
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These are the first and last sentences of the introductory paragraph.
What is the HOOK and the THESIS.
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social networking is bad. Because the government could be watching us 4 corrections
Social networking is bad because the government could be watching us.
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Write a hook: about making high schools all boys or all girls
Who would have thought attending an all boys high school would help me graduate on time?
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What is this thesis missing? Im my view it's a bad thing because it's bad for your health and it causes hyperactivity.
What is the topic
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the hook
What is the first sentence in the introduction that is meant to grab your attention.
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This sentence contains topic , claim and at least 2 supporting points.
What is the THESIS !!!!!!!
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Social networking are to help give people infourmasn. 4 corrections
Social networking helps give people information.
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Write a thesis: topic = violent video games / claim= against it 2 supporting points= increases aggressive emotions & see the world as a hostile place
In my view, violent video games should not even be made because it promotes aggressive emotions and players see the world as a hostile place.
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What is this thesis missing? Smoking pot is great!
What is at least 2 supporting points.
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supporting paragraphs
What is the paragraphs that support and prove the thesis sentence.
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These are the paragraphs where you cite evidence from the passage.
What is the SUPPORTING paragraphs.
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What would happen if social media wasn't around?
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Write a thesis: topic= every person at age 18 must serve 1 year in the military/ claim= for it / 2 supporting points= teaches discipline & provides a direction in life
Every 18 year old should be made to serve 1 year in the military because it would give them discipline and provide direction for their future.
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Is this a thesis? Going to high school means getting a better job but it is so boring!
No because it doesn't have a clear claim or supporting points.
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Why cite evidence?
What is proof from the passage that is placed in the supporting paragraphs.