The Other Side
Edwurd
EDITING
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  1. Read page 24 of The Other Side.    Some mornings my mama watched us. I waited for her to tell me to get down from the fence before I break my neck or something. But she never did.

What is the most likely reason the author used a hyperbole on page?

B.  To suggest that her mother was worried about her falling off the gate while with the other girl

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3. What does the illustration help the reader to understand?

D. To emphasize how Fanni felt invisible and made fun of by her brother.

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1. What change should be made in sentence 1?

C. Change dr. johnson veterinary clinic to  Dr. Johnson Veterinary Clinic 

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How does this sentence support the theme of the story?

D. It teaches that change can happen but it takes time.

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5. Read the sentence from paragraph 26.

Two former fisters, that Edwurd and me,  but brother and sister we finally be.


How does this sentence support the theme of the story?

C.   It teaches to be appreciative to family and loved ones.

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2. What change should be made in sentence 2?

A. Change arrives to arrived

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What does the main character’s words and actions with her neighbor in paragraphs 9 and 10  show about their relationship?

A. the girls have changed and made a decision to be friends.

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2. How does the setting affect the resolution of the story?

By the resolution got solved because the space pig felt Earth because  appreciated Fanni’s bravery.

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3. What change should be made in sentence 3?

B. Change threw to throw

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2. What is the main character’s main conflict?

B. The girl doesn’t understand why she can’t be friends with her neighbor.

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  1. PART 1

What is the main conflict in the story?

B. Edwurd lied about breaking his mom’s pig.

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4.  What change should be made in sentence 4?

A.  Change Meow to meow

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3.  Which sentences from the story best support the girl’s (main character’s) main TWO conflicts?

C.  The girl’s friend doesn’t let the neighbor jump rope and play with them.

E. The girl isn’t supposed to cross the fence.


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  1. PART 1

What is the main conflict in the story?

PART 2

Which of the following sentences supports PART 1?

C. And that's just what they did! They came for space pigs! With planes and with tanks and with loud whirligigs! Oh, it was dreadful! A real world stopper! All from an Edwurd Fudwupper fat whopper! (paragraph 16)

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5. What change should be made in sentence 6?

C. Change the exclamation mark to a question mark