Prepositions
On this day and age, having privacy is a priority.
In
You should visit Cairo in December. (Change "you" for something more formal.)
Tourists should visit Cairo in December.
It is very important for the moral support.
...for moral support.
There are two steps to make this days easy.
These
I will discuss who is better: cats or dogs.
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They can manipulate you by this.
With
When you use cash, you can control better, so your chances of spending on unnecessary things.
… better your chances...
Internet is a special place.
The Internet...
You don't demonstrate angry about the jokes.
Anger
I think that having a dog is harder than having a cat.
Having a dog is harder than having a cat.
Many people can go to your account for hack it.
To
(Last line of a concluding paragraph.) All of these pets have advantages and disadvantages.
Explain why this would work better as a topic sentence.
In conclusion, there are a lot of ways to adapt to the college.
to college.
You should follow these steps to get a succeed.
...to succeed.
We will see how you can survive your first year of college.
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I choose the clothes I want to wear depending of the weather.
On
She is very carefull and studious.
careful
We eat lunch together talking about weekend.
...the weekend.
I organize my bed.
I make my bed.
You are going to be able to manage your bank accounts from your home. But make sure you're on the official page.
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"But" should not start a sentence in an academic paper.
I drive to home.
I drive home.
There are many things we are used to doing: paying bills, doing transactions, make appointments, or finding a job.
Making
Her mornings are filled with the smell of a fresh brewed coffee and sanitizer. (Two mistakes)
(1) …of fresh...
(2) sanitizers.
I told the bartender I wanted to have other drink.
Another
I want to tell you that having an account online is dangerous.
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