TATDPTI
Novel Vocab
Essay Structure
TATDPTI 2
Editing and Revision
100

This is the protagonist and narrator of "The Absolutely True Diary of a Part-Time Indian

Arnold Spirit Jr. 

100

Very simple or basic; not modern

Primitive

100

This first paragraph of a five-paragraph essay introduces the topic and includes this crucial sentence that states the main idea of the essay

Thesis statement
100

This teacher at Wellpinit High School encourages Junior to leave the reservation to pursue a better education and future.

Mr. P

100

What is the strategy used for editing?

The CUPS method

200

Junior transfers from the school on his reservation to this high school, where he faces many challenges and new experiences

Rearden High School

200

Roaming place to place

Nomadic

200

These three paragraphs make up the main part of the essay, each focusing on a specific point or argument that supports the thesis.

Body paragraphs 

200

Junior's grandmother, known for her wisdom and kindness, shares this last piece of advice about tolerance before her untimely death.

"Forgive him" 

200

What is the strategy used for revision?

The ARMS method

300

Junior’s best friend from the reservation, known for his toughness and loyalty, though their relationship becomes strained after Junior transfers schools.

Rowdy

300

Asked for effect, not for an actual answer 

Rhetorical

300

Each body paragraph begins with this type of sentence, which introduces the main idea of the paragraph and connects it to the thesis

Topic sentence 

300

Junior's sister, who dreams of becoming a writer, moves to this state with her new husband before her tragic death.

Montana

300

Name one of the four steps in the CUPS method

Capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling

400

Junior's artistic talent often helps him cope with his struggles and express himself. He frequently creates these to communicate his feelings.

Cartoons or drawings

400
Having special rights or advantages

Privileged 

400

These supporting details within each body paragraph back up the main point introduced in the topic sentence

Evidence

400

This sport becomes an important part of Junior’s life at Reardan High School, where he joins the team and faces significant personal growth and challenges.

Basketball

400

Name one of the 4 steps to the ARMS strategy.

Add, Remove, Move around, Substitute 
500

Name one tragic event deeply affects Junior and highlights the ongoing issues of poverty and alcoholism on the reservation.

The death of his sister, Mary, in a trailer fire, his grandmother being killed by a drunk driver, or his father's best friend being shot and killed in a drunken fight.

500
Disagreeing (with), challenging

Contradicting

500

This final paragraph of a five-paragraph essay restates the thesis in a new way, summarizes the main points, and leaves the reader with a final thought.

Conclusion

500

Junior's father, who struggles with alcoholism, shows a moment of true love and dedication by doing this on Christmas.

Saving his last five dollars to give to Junior

500

Why are editing and revision crucial to the essay writing process?

They help create a clear and cohesive essay