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As a teenager he noticed ...

One day he realizes that...

100

His hometown had problems with plastic polluting the water.

His hometown has problems with plastic polluting the water.

100

Ferreira was born in Ballydehob, Ireland, surrounded by lakes, rivers, and coastlines.

Ferreira lives near the Irish coast.

100

From very early on he has seen microplastic pollute the local waters.

One day he realizes that microplastic particles pollute local waters.

200

it attaches itself to...

it sticks to ...

it combines with ...


200

When he was a child he enjoyed the outdoors.

From early on, he enjoys the outdoors.

200

Now he still works on cleaning water for the world.

He currently works on industrial systems to withdraw microplastics.

200

Oceans, rivers and lakes are most heavily polluted.

Microplastics are found in the environment as well as human bodies.

300

Ferreira`s method is simple and inexpensive solution.

Ferreira`s solution is easy and costs little.

300

He created a liquid magnet.

He creates a liquid magnet.

300

His favourits subjects were chemistry and physics.

He is keen on science projects.

300

Ferreira`s solution does not need dangerous  chemicals.

Ferreira`s solution does not need especially dangerous chemicals.

400

Ferreira wins first prize.

Ferreira is the winner of ...

400

Existing systems can`t filter particles.

Existing systems cannot filter particles.

400

Fionn wanted to solve the environmental problem.

Fionn managed to clean water from microplastics.

400

Experts say that 88 percent of microplastic particles in water disappear after a treatment with ferrofluids.

Fionns says that 88 percent of microplastic particles in water disappear after a treatment with ferrofluids.

500

Fionn Ferreira grew up in a small town in Ireland. As a child he loved exploring the nature and small experiments.

Ever since his childhood in rural Ireland Fionn has enjoyed both being outside and researching.

500

He gets nominated.

He is nominated.

500

In 2019, he wins first prize and $ 50.000 at the Google Science Fair. In 2023, he is awarded the Young Investors Prize by the European Patent Office.


His invention was awarded prizes at international science competitions.

500

Ferreira`s invention would be great for so many househlods and hopefully we can all soon get it.

Ferreira`s invention is currently tested in private homes.