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Fragment, Run-On, or Complete Sentence
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Composition
100
aunt sally brought me a seashell from the Galveston seashore.
Aunt Sally brought me a seashell from the Galveston seashore.
100
We can't go swimming the lifeguard is not on duty
We can't go swimming. The lifeguard is not on duty.
100
He snored.
Complete Sentence
100
My freind Vy helped me decorate for the party. Which change, if any, needs to be made? A. Change decorate to decorated B. Change helped to help C. Change party to parties D. Change freind to friend
D. Change freind to friend
100
Which sentence should be included in both personal narrative and expository compositions, and tells what the essay is mostly about?
The central idea!
200
On our picnic at samuell-grand park, we had american cheese sandwiches for lunch.
On our picnic at Samuell-Grand Park, we had American cheese sandwiches for lunch.
200
Leon tiptoed into the room so he would not wake up his grandmother's huge St. Bernard.
Leon tiptoed into the room, so he would not wake up his grandmother's huge St. Bernard.
200
Scampering across the field.
Fragment
200
Which is the correct spelling? A. favoritte B. favorit C. favortte D. favorite
D. favorite
200
A strong lead should _________ the reader, making them curious to read more!
A strong lead should hook the reader, making them curious to read more!
300
from the top of reunion tower, we could see the whole City of Dallas!
From the top of Reunion Tower, we could see the whole city of Dallas!
300
After our yoga class Ana and I made fruit smoothies
After our yoga class, Ana and I made fruit smoothies.
300
I went to Wal-Mart and then I went to Sonic and after that I had to go to Lowe's to get a ladder.
Run-On
300
There were fourteen babys in the hospital nursery. What change, if any, needs to be made? A. Change There to Their B. Change fourteen to forteen C. Change babys to babies D. Make no change
C. Change babys to babies
300
Angry at my sister for taking the last of the milk, I grabbed the plastic cup and poured it slowly over her head. As the milk ran down into her hair and created a white puddle on the floor, I gasped at what I had done. "Mom!" she screamed. My heart thudded as I heard Mom's footsteps coming closer. "Uh oh, what have I done?" I thought. Is this an exploded moment? Why or why not?
Yes, because the action is slowed down and described using a lot of sensory details, and telling the narrator's thoughts, feelings, and actions.
400
cara, michael, daisy, and bobby worked on their project about the civil war.
Cara, Michael, Daisy, and Bobby worked on their project about the Civil War.
400
I took a book towel and umbrella to the beach.
I took a book, towel, and umbrella to the beach.
400
My mom likes pizza, but she loves lasagna.
Complete Sentence
400
"We're all going to the movies and your coming, too!" my friends announced. What change needs to be made, if any?
Change your to you're
400
What are the parts of a Ba-Da-Bing sentence?
Where your feet went, what you saw, and what you thought
500
we moved from jacksonville, north carolina to paris, texas when i was a baby.
We moved from Jacksonville, North Carolina to Paris, Texas when I was a baby.
500
"Let's go shoot some hoops at the park suggested Joel."
"Let's go shoot some hoops at the park," suggested Joel.
500
Sara who is my cousin.
Fragment
500
The fish swam around it's bowl in slow circles. What change needs to be made, if any?
Change it's to its ("it is" bowl doesn't make sense)
500
Revise this sentence to use a stronger verb and make a picture in the reader's head: Muggs is a messy eater.
Example: Muggs splatters his food all over the kitchen wall when he eats. (answers may vary)