Steps To Writing
What is the first thing you should do when you log in to the testing portal and the teacher says to begin?
Read the prompt
Is the following a sufficient thesis? Why or why not?
Cell phones should be allowed in school because they can help with research, they can be used for academic games, and they are good to have in case of an emergency.
Sufficient because it formally states the claim and gives reasons.
Is the following citation Correct or Incorrect. Why?
In Source 1, the author states, "The primary problem is that often people who procrastinate are found to do either a poorer job when trying to get tasks finished at the last minute, or they do not finish the tasks at all."
Incorrect.
Even though it uses a precise citation (Source 1) and includes a quotation, it's missing the parenthetical citation afterward (Author's Name and paragraph number)
An introduction should include what 3 things?
Hook, background info, and thesis statement
Identify all of the transition words/phrases.
First of all, procrastination can cause people to feel overwhelmed. Sometimes, a person may put off a task or delay it because they want it to be absolutely perfect. (Source 1) Another reason why procrastination can lead to feelings of stress is the task being too difficult. If you put off studying for a test or writing an essay because you don't understand it or it is too hard for you, then it will only become more and more difficult as time goes on.
First of all, another reason
What two things should you identify in the prompt?
Clue words that tell you what type of essay you should write and the topic.
Is the following a sufficient thesis? Why or why not?
I believe that clear backpacks should not be required in school because of privacy issues.
No it is not sufficient because it says "I" and only has one reason.
Is the following citation Correct or Incorrect? Why?
The article talked about procrastination being a bad thing.
Incorrect because it does not give the title and is not specific enough. (It doesn't have a quote!)
Put the following sentences in order for an introduction paragraph.
1. Procrastination is the habit of putting tasks off until the last minute.
2. Procrastinating is harmful because the required tasks become even more overwhelming and it is highly likely that they will never be completed.
3. Have you ever waited until the very last minute to write a paper, finish a project, or study for a big exam?
3, 1, 2
What is a good strategy to practice if the 10-minute warning is called and you are still writing your second body paragraph?
Conclude the paragraph, skip a few lines and write the conclusion. You can always go back and write more if you have extra time.
How many paragraphs should an informative essay receive? How many paragraphs should an argumentative essay receive?
4-5
5-6
Is the following a sufficient thesis? Why or why not?
Learning to write in cursive is not needed in schools any longer because of the increase in technology use, time is better spent on learning other subjects, and it is a lost art.
Yes it is sufficient because it formally states the claim and has three reasons.
Is the following citation Correct or Incorrect. Why?
"Completing responsibilities in a timely manner is overwhelmingly the most recommended way to be productive." (Source 1)
Correct.
The quotation marks and punctuation are used correctly, and there is a parenthetical citation. (But remember to include the author's name if you have it.)
Procrastination is not always bad because if a person is self-disciplined and the tasks can be structured in a way that will ensure it gets completed, then it can be positive.
What is this sentence an example of?
Thesis Statement
Source 1: Animal Intelligence by Bobby Bobson
Koko the gorilla has learned over 100 words using sign language.
Using the information above, properly cite the evidence for an essay.
According to "Animal Intelligence," "Koko the gorilla has learned over 100 words using sign language." (Bobson 1)
Thesis statements for an argumentative essay should always include...
your claim and reasons
Is the following a sufficient thesis? Why or why not?
My opinion is that school should not be held year around. First, because students need a break. Next, because it would be very costly. Last, because many families go on vacation during summer months.
No it is not sufficient because it uses the pronoun "My" and it is not one concise sentence.
Is the following citation Correct or Incorrect. Why?
I can infer from both passages that structured procrastination can be a positive thing.
Incorrect because of personal pronouns, and not citing specific title or passage.
Procrastination can be good for some, and bad for others. We have all put things off once or twice. Procrastination is bad because of many things. It makes it harder to get things accomplished and it makes everything harder.
Is this a sufficient introduction? Why or why not?
No it is not sufficient because the thesis is not one sentence, and it is vague.
1. The author from Source 1 states that, "No matter which task they pick first, they will spend their time wisely, and eventually everything can be completed."
2. The author from "Source 1" states that, "No matter which task they pick first, they will spend their time wisely, and eventually everything can be completed."
Which one is correct? Why?
#1
Quotation marks are needed around titles, but not around "Source 1"
After you're finished writing, what should you do if there is still time left?
Give 3 things.
Proof your essay.
Make corrections.
Revise and improve your essay.
Is the following a sufficient thesis? Why or why not?
I am going to argue why it is important to learn to read and write.
No it is not sufficient because it includes personal pronouns and does not state reasons.
Is the following citation Correct or Incorrect. Why?
The passage "Structured Procrastination" discussed how it is possible to plan out and use procrastination to your advantage.
Incorrect.
The title is formatted correctly and the evidence is paraphrased, but it's not quoted. No quote, no grade!
What geometrical shape symbolizes how the introductory paragraph should be formatted? What introductory element should come at the bottom of that shape?
Thesis/Claim
1. In the passage "a stitch in time," "Feeling overworked can lead an otherwise productive person to feel like putting off some work just to take a break." (Smith 1)
2. In the passage A Stitch in Time, "Feeling overworked can lead an otherwise productive person to feel like putting off some work just to take a break." (Smith 1)
3. In the passage "A Stitch in Time," "Feeling overworked can lead an otherwise productive person to feel like putting off some work just to take a break." (Smith 1)
Which one is correct? Why?
#3
Titles must receive quotation marks.