Setting
Editing and
Revising
Character Development
Vocabulary
Pronouns and Antecedents
100

If you were going to write a story about someone dying of thirst, what might be the setting?

answers may vary, but could include: a desert, a deserted island, etc.

100

Find the irrelevant detail.

Liam woke up early on Saturday to help his dad in the garden. They planted colorful flowers and pulled out pesky weeds while enjoying the warm sunshine. They even added a small fountain. The neighbor's yard was a mess. After a few hours, the garden looked beautiful, and they both felt proud of their hard work.

"The neighbor's yard was a mess."

100

What are some details from "The Good Samaritan" that characterize Rey as 'respectful?'

Answers may vary, but include: even when disappointed, he doesn't lash out at Mr. Sanchez; he goes to pick up his brother even when he doesn't want to; he doesn't argue with Mrs. Sanchez or try to confront Orly; he helps Mr. Sanchez all summer; he fixes Mr. Sanchez's flat tire even though he dislikes him; he thinks about his father's feelings when he makes decisions.

100

The expedition to the ancient city was filled with unexpected challenges and thrilling discoveries.

What is the meaning of "expedition?"

trip, journey, voyage, mission

100

Provide the correct pronoun: When Sarah heard a loud sound, ____ ran to the door.

she

200

How does the setting of "Hatchet" contribute to the plot?

Answers may vary.

The setting of "Hatchet" creates a problem (conflict) for the protagonist to resolve. The setting puts him in danger and makes him feel alone.

200

What conjunction, or joining word, would best link these two sentences?

"Cats are known for being great hunters, ____ it's important to have toys in their environment that they can hunt for fun."

so

200

How does Mickey Rangel's behavior demonstrate responsibility in "The Magic Marker Mystery?"

Answers may vary, but include: he helps the principal when she asks; he doesn't just assume Bucho is guilty; he doesn't cave to peer pressure from his friends; he pays attention in Miss Garza's vocabulary class.

200

To distinguish between the two species of birds, the scientist noted their unique colors and songs. 

What is the meaning of "distinguish?"

tell apart, differentiate, tell the difference between

200

My friends and I play football in ___ recess field.

our

300

Which aspect of the setting in "The Mighty Miss Malone" has the biggest impact on Deza?

The time period of the story has the most impact, because the 1930s included the Great Depression AND racist laws and attitudes in America. 

OR

The Hooverville has the biggest impact on Deza, because she had to move schools when she moved to the Hooverville, and that's when she started to experience racism at school.

300

What transition word or phrase could be used at the beginning of sentence 3?

(1) A small community of people lived in a village in the valley. (2) One season, they had no rain, which threatened their crops. (3) They decided to build a new irrigation system, which saved their crops and brought their community together.

Answers may vary, but include: as a result, therefore, finally, in the end, etc.

300

Which of our stories from this unit shows a protagonist who is struggling with her own immaturity?

Eleven

300

The band played better than ever before after hearing the enthusiasm from their audience.

What does "enthusiasm" mean?

passion, excitement, strong interest

300

When Jim became CEO, his wife was able to leave ___ job.

her

400

Which story from our unit involves characters struggling in an urban setting AND a rural setting?

Scout's Honor

400

Find the irrelevant detail.

Emily woke up early to bake her grandmother's famous chocolate chip cookies. She carefully mixed the ingredients and placed the dough on a baking sheet. Meanwhile, her cat, Mr. Whiskers, was busy chasing a fly around the living room. Emily couldn't wait to bite into a warm, buttery, chewy cookie.

Meanwhile, her cat, Mr. Whiskers, was busy chasing a fly around the living room.

400

How do the boys from "Scout's Honor" show that they have matured?

They all agree to give up and go home. They agree that you have to be pretty tough to be the one to give up first.

400

The detective used her intuition to solve the case that had puzzled everyone else in town.

What does "intuition" mean?

instinct, gut feeling, 'following your heart'

400

When ____ get to the hotel, my sister and I are going straight to the pool.

we

500

In which setting from "The Magic Marker Mystery" does Mickey discover the truth? AND in which setting does he reveal the culprit?

Mickey discovers the truth in the cafeteria. He reveals the culprit in the playground/recess area.

500

Choose the best transition word for the beginning of sentence 3.

(1) Lila had been training for the marathon for months and felt ready for the challenge. (2) She woke up early on race day, excited and energized. (3) __________, as she reached the starting line, it began to rain. (4) Despite the rain, she decided to run, pushing through the conditions and finishing with a smile.

Answers may vary, but include: however, unfortunately, etc.

500

How does Mr. Perpich affect Brian's approach to his situation in "Hatchet?"

Answers may vary, but include: Mr. Perpich taught Brian to think of himself as an asset. He also taught Brian to be realistic and 'get serious.' Brian has more belief in himself because of his time with Mr. Perpich. He also approaches the situation with more reasoning.

500

To maintain a healthy lifestyle, it's important to incorporate a balanced diet and regular exercise into your routine.

What does "incorporate" mean?

bring in, include, involve, blend 

500

Everyone in the class was proud of ______ own work.

their