Su-PLICES!
Combingsentences
Edit this
I agree!
Peachy Speechy
100
While time often erases bad memories, my ex-girlfriend never forgets anything, she even remembers things that happened over five years ago.
While time often erases bad memories, my ex-girlfriend never forgets anything; she even remembers things that happened over five years ago.
100
Hartford is the capital of Connecticut. It is the second largest city in the state.
Hartford, the second largest city in the state, is the capital of Connecticut.
100
The doctor said that if I don’t start eating something other than Hershey bars within a month my brain will be solid chocolate.
The doctor said that if I don’t start eating something other than Hershey bars within a month, my brain will be solid chocolate.
100
Bring your rollerblades with you when you come to my house.
Correct
100
Less people live in Canada than in the United States.
Fewer people live in Canada than in the United States.
200
My father is chairman of the Committee on Foreign Relations, he also heads the Warrant Commission.
My father is chairman of the committee on Foreign Relations; he also heads the Warrant Commission.
200
Detroit was once known as an industrial center. It was the home of several manufacturers. They made firearms, typewriters, bicycles, and even cars.
Once known as an industrial center, Detroit was the home of manufacturers of firearms, typewriters, bicycles, and even cars.
200
I have never thought of myself as a nobody accomplishing nothing in life.
I never think of myself as someone who accomplishes little in life.
200
I rarely ever sleep late, but today I stayed in bed until noon.
I rarely sleep late, but today I stayed in bed until noon.
200
DAILY DOUBLE
We had a great time at Myrtle Beach; they have so much to do there.
300
All over the country, people sell products over the Internet, these people are making impressive profits.
All over the country, people sell products over the Internet. These people are making impressive profits.
300
Today several insurance companies make Indianapolis their home. Aetna, the Travelers, the Hartford, and Cigna are in Indianapolis. Their home offices are within miles of one another.
Today several insurance companies, like Aetna, the Travelers, the Hartford, and Cigna, have home offices in Indianapolis within miles of one another.
300
Johnny is so sleepy he hardly remembers his own name.
Correct
300
I am sort of tired.
I am a little tired.
300
Mom gave both of us, Elizabeth and I, money for the movie.
Mom gave both of us, Elizabeth and me, money for the movie.
400
One person had been exporting farm equipment; in fact, he exports over 30,000 pieces of machinery a year.
Correct
400
Some of these factories have been torn down. Some of them have been converted to artists' studios.
Some of these factories have been torn down, others converted to artists' studios.
400
Teresa watched the lion approach wide-eyed with fear.
Wide-eyed with fear, Teresa watched the lion approach.
400
Everybody loves their mother.
People love their mother.
400
When I was at Grandma’s house, she said, “Here’s one of my famous baked hams. Bring it to your mom.”
When I was at Grandma’s house, she said, “Here’s one of my famous baked hams. Take it to your mom.”
500
The team valiantly ran down the field, still they could not score a touchdown.
The team valiantly ran down the field; still they could not score a touchdown. OR The team valiantly ran down the field. Still they could not score a touchdown
500
DAILY DOUBLE
Today, great wealth abounds in Dallas. The wealth is centered in the oil industry. However, few manufacturing jobs are still available.
500
I told my mom I wanted to go to the mall to buy some supplies for my science project, and that is what happened.
I told my mom I wanted to go to the mall to buy some supplies for my science project, so she took me.
500
Neither Larry or Ted won’t lend me their bike.
Neither Larry nor Ted won’t lend me their bike.
500
Yuriko is a friend of Miranda’s and me.
Yuriko is a friend of Miranda’s and mine.