Verbs
Capitalization
Punctuation
Run-ons/Fragments
Run-ons/Fragments
100
First with the help of his two older brothers, Jim practice driving the family car around town.
First with the help of his two older brothers, Jim practiced driving the family car around town.
100
two boys, ali o. wambari and jacob p. rust, were both sophomores at hanging moss high school.
Two boys, Ali. O. Wambari and Jacob P. Rust, were both sophomores at Hanging Moss High School.
100
At a school function, Principal W C Sorey began a long, boring speach at 7:00 P M He began by telling the life story of the founder of Chastain Middle School, James C Chastain He hoped to inspire students to model their lives on this influential man
At a school function, Principal W. C. Sorey began a long, boring speech at 7:00 P.M. He began by telling the life story of the founder of Chastain Middle School, James C Chastain. He hoped to inspire students to model their lives on this influential man.
100
A 90 percent chance that 2 feet of snow will fall in the next 2 hours.
There is a 90 percent chance that 2 feet of snow will fall in the next 2 hours.
100
One kitchen worker running to the kitchen and returning with a spoon.
One kitchen worker was running to the kitchen and returning with a spoon.
200
The woman had came to Carmel's Clothing Shop, where she give the clerk a very difficult time. The hours went by and still she had not yet began to be satisfyed. One by one she inspected each article of clothing. She ask the clerk questions regarding the article's size, color, workmanship, and durability. She wondered if any items had ever shrank, and so on. Then, she lay each item down.
A woman had come to Carmel's Clothing Shop, where she gave the clerk a very difficult time. The hours went by and still she had not yet begun to be satisfied. One by one, she inspected each article of clothing. She asked the clerk questions regarding the article's size, color, workmanship and durability. She wondered if any items had ever shrunk, and so on. Then she laid each item down.
200
One day sir arthur conan doyle hailed a cab in paris. He threw in his small samsonite suitcase and climbed into the cab.
One day Sir Arthur Conan Doyle hailed a cab in Paris. He threw in his small Samsonite suitcase and climbed into the cab.
200
As Ian reached for the shoes, the clerks smile broadened. Putting the shoes under the counter, he said, "Heres your receipt. You can come back and pick up the shoes in two weeks. Thats how long youd have waited for your mail-order shoes to arrive!"
As Ian reached for the shoes, the clerk's smile broadened. Putting the shoes under the counter, he said, "Here's your receipt. You can come back and pick up the shoes in two weeks. That's how long you'd have waited for your mail-order shoes to arrive!"
200
In order that we keep roads clear for emergency vehicles we suggest you stay at home from work tonight and tomorrow you'll be much safer and more comfortable.
In order that we keep roads clear for emergency vehicles, we suggest you stay at home from work tonight, and tomorrow you'll be much safer and more comfortable.
200
The baby-sitter had been instructed to take the children on the bus to their ant's house at 3:00 P.M. the aunt lived across town.
The babysitter had been instructed to take the children on the bust to their aunt's house at 3:00 P.M. The aunt lived across town.
300
Dinosaur National Monument was located in Jensen, Utah. Thousands of dinosaur bones are at this amazing site. The Visitor Center displayed dinosaur bones in their natural setting as they were actually found in the rocks. This exhibit was spectacular and attracts many tourists each year.
Dinosaur national Monument is located in Jensen, Utah. Thousands of dinosaur bones are at this amazing site. The Visitor Center displays dinosaur bones in their natural setting as they were actually found in the rocks. This exhibit is spectacular and attracts many tourists each year.
300
one evening in september, the candidate's wife collapsed into a chair in the chilton hotel, where they were staying. she kicked off her expensive shoes and sayed, "what a day! i don't think i've ever been this tired!"
One evening in September, the candidate's wife collapsed into a chair in the Chilton Hotel, where they were staying. She kicked off her expensive shoes and said, "What a day! I don't think I've ever been this tired!"
300
Teacher: Why dont you ever know the answers to any of my questions Student: If I did what would be the use in my coming here
Teacher: Why don't you ever know the answers to any of my questions? Student: If I did, what would be the use in my coming here?
300
Look outside while there weatherman was talking.
Many listeners began to look outside while their weatherman was talking.
300
Arriving at the bus stop just in time and setling down with the youngsters.
The kindergarten class was arriving at the bus stop just in time and settling down with the youngsters.
400
Two students was absent. The teacher asks the class won't Ginny and Jill be here this afternoon.
Two students were absent. The teacher asked the class if Ginny and Jill would be here this afternoon.
400
Student: I was the smartest one in seventh grade today, mom. Mom: Oh, why was that? Student: Miss Gaston asked each of us to draw our favorite part of the book hansel and gretel. then the class had to guess what it was. mine was the only picture no one could guess but i knew what it was all along.
Student: I was the smartest one in seventh grade today, Mom. Mom: Oh, why was that? Student: Miss Gaston asked each of us to draw our favorite part of the book Hansel and Gretel. Then, the class had to guess what it was. Mine was the only picture no one could guess, but I knew what it was all along.
400
Mr Bowman was taking a long awaited day off from his job at Hunter Construction Company. He had been putting in a lot of overtime and he really needed some time to relax. His plans for the day included sleeping late sunbathing reading a good book and taking a nap.
Mr. Bowman was taking a long, awaited day off from his job at Hunter Construction Company. He had been putting in a lot of overtime, and he really needed some time to relax. His plans for the day included sleeping late, sunbathing, reading a good book, and taking a nap.
400
The whether was great, 70 degrees with clear skies, the next morning dawned equally fair and warm.
The weather was great, 70 degrees with clear skies; the next morning dawned equally fair and warm.
400
Seeing no sharp rocks, sea anemones, or jellyfish.
Seeing no sharp rocks, sea anemone, or jellyfish, we decided to go swimming!
500
Finally, the day for the written and driving tests arrives. A written test of the road rules starts the exam. Each question on driving and car use are carefully and correctly answered. Jim scores 100 percent. The test for his eyes presents no problem for him either.
Finally, the day for the written and driving tests arrives. A written test of the road rules starts the exam. Each question on driving and car use is carefully and correctly answered. Jim scores 100 percent. The test for his eyes presents no problem for him either.
500
the school band of rockvale junior high school was giving its annual fall concert. it was a pleasant october evening. a west wind was blowing gently, and the skys were clear. clearly visible in the sky overhead was the big dipper, the little dipper, and the north star. indeed, it was a perfect setting for the open-air band concert, which was entitled "harvest moon concert."
The school band of Rockvale Junior High School was giving its annual fall concert. It was a pleasant October evening. A west wind was blowing gently, and the skies were clear. Clearly visible in the sky overhead was the Big Dipper, the Little Dipper, and the North Star. Indeed, it was a perfect setting for the open-air band concert, which was entitled "Harvest Moon Concert."
500
The young man said nervusly to a girl he admired if youll give me your phone number ill give you a call.
The young man said nervously to a girl he admired, "If you'll give me your phone number, I'll give you a call."
500
Very anxious to make a good impression by seeing that everything was exactly right for his students.
He was very anxious to make a good impression by seeing that everything was exactly right for his students.
500
With a running start dove into the water.
Gretchen took off with a running start and dove into the water.