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The excited children? ran outside to play.
The excited children ran outside to play.
my friend sarah loves to read books.
My friend Sarah loves to read books.
The kittens were playng with a ball of yarn.
The kittens were playing with a ball of yarn.
Emily walked to school every day.
Emily walks to school every day.
The dog barking ran after the cat who was chasing a squirrel.
The dog that was barking ran after the cat who was chasing a squirrel.
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The barking dog ran after the cat who was chasing a squirrel.
"Sarah did you finish your homework asked mom.
"Sarah, did you finish your homework?" asked Mom.
we visited the grand canyon national park last summer.
We visited the Grand Canyon National Park last summer.
I accidentaly spilled milk on the kitchen flor.
I accidentally spilled milk on the kitchen floor.
Last night, I am watching a movie with my family.
Last night, I was watching a movie with my family.
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Last night, I watched a movie with my family.
My friend whenever she has free time loves reading books.
Whenever she has free time, my friend loves reading books.
After winning the big game: the team celebrated at a restaurant.
After winning the big game, the team celebrated at a restaurant.
captain james cook was a famous british explorer.
Captain James Cook was a famous British explorer.
The potencial for rain was high, so we brought umbrallas.
The potential for rain was high, so we brought umbrellas.
If I will have enough money, I buy a new bike.
If I have enough money, I will buy a new bike.
The science project wasn't completed until Tuesday which was due on Monday.
The science project, which was due on Monday, wasn't completed until Tuesday.
The delicious apple pie made by grandma with love, warmed our bellies:
The delicious apple pie, made by Grandma with love, warmed our bellies.
did you read the novel "to kill a mockingbird" by harper lee?
Did you read the novel "To Kill a Mockingbird" by Harper Lee?
The tecnolojy copany unveiled its newest inovation.
The tecnology company unveiled its newest innovation.
Danny and his friends camping at the lake last weekend and swims in the cool water.
Danny and his friends went/were camping at the lake last weekend and swam in the cool water.
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Danny and his friends camped at the lake last weekend and swam in the cool water.
Sam who is on the basketball team that he has practice after school practices every day.
Sam, who is on the basketball team, practices every day after school on days that he has practice.
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Sam, who is on the basketball team, has practice every day after school.
Juan spent his afternoon hiking up the tall mountain which he had wanted to climb for years but he forgot to bring enough water and snacks?
Juan spent his afternoon hiking up the tall mountain, which he had wanted to climb for years, but he forgot to bring enough water and snacks.
my uncle works at the smithsonian institution's national museum of natural history in washington, d.c.
My uncle works at the Smithsonian Institution's National Museum of Natural History in Washington, D.C.
The arkeologist dizcovered an ansient Egyptian relic.
The archeologist discovered an ancient Egyptian relic.
Even though Sara had studied very hard, she didn't doing well on tests because she is nervous.
Even though Sara had studied very hard, she didn't do well on tests because she was nervous.
The ancient ruins were located in the dense jungle archaeologists have spent years studying where very few people have ventured.
The ancient ruins, which archaeologists have spent years studying, were located in the dense jungle where very few people have ventured.