POSSESSIVES
The sentence is: "Did you know Paul that some people do not like to play soccer?"
What is: "Did you know, Paul, that some people do not like to play soccer?"
The sentence is: There dog is really cute!
What is : Their dog is really cute! (CHANGE THERE TO THEIR)
The sentence is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
What is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees? (CHANGE EXCLAMATION POINT TO QUESTION MARK)
The sentence is: Hey mom, can I have a snack?
What is: Hey Mom, can I have a snack? ( CAPITALIZE MOM OR DAD WHEN THEY ARE BEING SPOKEN TO DIRECTLY)
The sentence is: Most people had already left town. Dolley would not go until she had packed all of her most valuable things.
What is : Most people had already left town, BUT Dolley would not go until she had packed all of her most valuable things.