The sentence is: "Did you know Paul that some people do not like to play soccer?"
What is: "Did you know, Paul, that some people do not like to play soccer?"
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The sentence is: There dog is really cute!
What is : Their dog is really cute! (CHANGE THERE TO THEIR)
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The sentence is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees.
What is: Did you know, for example, that there is a fish that can climb trees? (CHANGE THE PERIOD TO A QUESTION MARK)
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Dogs are nice animals.
These furry creatures are amazing, caring family members that provide lots of love.
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Is this detailing answering WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE? or WHY IS IT IMPORTANT? or BOTH???????
Having a jacket during winter can provide someone with a great deal of warmth and protection from the blistering cold.
Why is it important...? but is does describe the cold... :)
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The sentence is : John was expected to study his Spelling words finish his Math problems and read for twenty minutes.
What is: John was expected to study his Spelling words, finish his Math problems, and read for twenty minutes. ?
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The sentence is: I am going too the zoo this weekend.
What is: I am going TO the zoo this weekend.
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The sentence is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds.
What is: The pumpkin should weigh at least 500 pounds, but the best ones are usually closer to 700 pounds. (INSERT COMMA AND CONJUNCTION - "BUT")
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It is very, very important to make sure you pick the right movie.
Choosing the correct film can be extremely difficult, but having your interests in mind, can make a huge difference.
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Is this detailing answering WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE? or WHY IS IT IMPORTANT? or BOTH???????
The cuddling, soft, puppies can grow up to weigh almost 100lbs within the first year of their life.
BOTH! It is describing the puppies and giving important information about them as well.
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The sentence is: Johns book was accidentally left out on the playground.
What is: John's book was accidentally left out on the playground.
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The sentence is: Your going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
What is: YOU'RE (YOU ARE) going to have to finish the test before you can play a game on the computer.
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The sentence is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
What is: How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees? (CHANGE EXCLAMATION POINT TO QUESTION MARK)
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Having homework is bad.
The horrible task of taking work home is the worst punishment a student can receive.
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Is this detailing answering WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE? or WHY IS IT IMPORTANT? or BOTH???????
Being courageous means that you always complete your task even if you are extremely afraid.
WHY IS IT IMPORTANT???
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The sentences is: We went to Chicago Illinois for our vacation.
What is: We went to Chicago, Illinois, for our vacation. ?
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The sentence is: Did you loose your book?
What is: Did you LOSE your book?
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The sentence is: Cameron asked, can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?
What is: Cameron asked, "Can we have pizza and ice cream for dinner?" INSERT QUOTATION MARKS BEGINNING AND END
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You have to be a good friend because then you could have a friend, too.
Giving your friendship can be extremely challenging at times, but very rewarding.
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Is this detailing answering WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE? or WHY IS IT IMPORTANT? or BOTH???????
The smoldering desert can have people quickly dehydrating in a matter of hours.
BOTH! WHAT DOES IT LOOK LIKE??WHY IS IT IMPORTANT?
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The sentence is: Believe it or not some people do not like pizza.
What is: Believe it or not, some people do not like pizza.
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The sentence is: Are family loves to go camping.
What is: OUR (YOUR) family loves to go camping.
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The sentence is: It was beginning to get late but Dad kept his promise.
What is: It was beginning to get late,(COMMA) but Dad kept his promise.
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People need to go to school because for you can be smarter.
A college degree can help advance your education and career goals.
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Cruel General Santa Anna fought merciless against the poor Texas army at the Alamo in order to achieve a victory for the Mexican Army.