Parallelism
Fix the parallelism error:
She enjoys hiking, biking, and to swim in her free time.
She enjoys hiking, biking, and swimming in her free time.
What is modifying the subject of this sentence?
The green pants became a favorite in the teacher's wardrobe.
Green
Fix the agreement error:
The team of experts were divided on their opinions about the new project.
The team of experts was divided on their opinions about the new project.
Fix the passive voice:
The lions are being fed by the zookeepers when the visitors arrive.
The zookeepers feed the lions when the visitors arrive.
Insert the correct transition:
The salesman explained that what he was selling will make work easier and leave you more productive. ______, the new software comes with enhanced security features to protect your data.
A. However
B. Additionally
C. In contrast
D. Because of this
B. Additionally
Fix the parallelism error:
Sarah not only excels in academics but also is a skilled athlete.
Sarah not only excels in academics but also in athletics.
What is modifying "store?"
I went to the store just off of Broadway to buy art supplies.
Just off of Broadway
Fix the agreement error:
My collection of vintage postcards need a proper display in my living room.
My collection of vintage postcards needs a proper display in my living room.
Fix the passive voice:
The stray kitten was rescued by the kind-hearted neighbor and brought to the animal shelter.
The kind-hearted neighbor rescued the stray kitten and brought to the animal shelter.
Many people want to buy the new, organizational software. ________, some team members raised concerns about the proposed changes, citing potential disruptions to the current workflow.
A. On the other hand
B. Likewise
C. For example
D. Similarly
A. On the other hand
Fix the parallelism error:
The manager told the team to work diligently, with precision, and be creative.
The manager told the team to work diligently, precisely, and creatively.
Fix the misplaced modifier:
Walking down the street, the tall buildings impressed me with their architectural beauty.
Walking down the street, I was impressed by the tall buildings' architectural beauty.
-or-
The tall buildings impressed me with their architectural beauty while I walked down the street.
Fix the agreement error:
Either the cat or the dogs is responsible for knocking over the flower vase.
Either the cat or the dogs are responsible for knocking over the flower vase.
Make the phrase in parentheses more concise:
(Over the course of the next month,) I'll decide whether to accept the job offer from the company.
Next month
Moving during the school year is difficult but doable. ______, transitioning to a new school can be challenging for students, but with time, they often find a sense of belonging and form lasting friendships.
A. However
B. Conversely
C. In addition
D. Initially
D. Initially
Fix the parallelism error:
The project requires planning, resource coordinating, and that deadlines are met.
The project requires planning, coordinating resources, and meeting deadlines.
Fix the dangling modifier:
Running late for the meeting, the car keys were frantically searched for in the morning rush.
Running late for the meeting, I frantically searched for the car keys in the morning rush.
Fix the agreement error:
Neither the manager nor his assistant have reviewed the new proposal yet.
Neither the manager nor his assistant has reviewed the new proposal yet.
Make the phrase in parentheses more concise:
I do not believe that running in a marathon is an activity (that I would enjoy participating in.)
I would enjoy.
Jeanine joined newspaper because she felt like she needed to be more connected to her school. ________, she learned that participating in extracurricular activities not only enhances the overall school experience but also provides valuable opportunities for personal growth and skill development.
A. Consequently
B. Conversely
C. In like manner
D. For example
A. Consequently
Fix the parallelism error:
She has painted the walls, rearranged the furniture, and is buying new curtains for the room.
She has painted the walls, rearranged the furniture, and bought new curtains for the room.
Fix the misplaced modifier:
Crying with joy over her birthday presents, the thoughtful gifts were too overwhelming for Marcia.
Crying with joy over her birthday presents, Marcia was overwhelmed by her thoughtful gifts.
Fix the agreement errors (2):
Each of the girls are ready for their dance recital.
Each of the girls is ready for her dance recital.
Make the phrase in parentheses more concise:
(The reason for the delay in the project's completion is) due to unexpected issues during testing.
The project is delayed
The project manager held a meeting to go over new communication software to increase team productivity. ______, the project manager emphasized the importance of effective communication to ensure everyone is on the same page.
A. In spite of this
B. Therefore
C. Moreover
D. As well as
C. Moreover