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i need to go to the grocery store and get apples bananas and pears

I need to go to the grocery store and get apples, bananas and pears.

100

They swammed in the pool untill it was allmost dark.

They swam in the pool until it was almost dark.

200

Hamilton always uses his write hand to right his name.


Hamilton always uses his right hand to write his name.


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My favorite game is chess do you know how to play!


My favorite game is chessDo you know how to play?


300

can you believe i’m going to travel to new york in june?


Can you believe I'm going to travel to New York in June?

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mrs. brogna loves anithing that haas chocolate.

Mrs. Brogna loves anything that has chocolate.

400

Blue crabs feed on feed on almost anything they cAn catch. They are found as far north as Nova Scotia and as far south as the Gulf of mexico. They live in lagoons and estuaries An estuary is the point where a rivr meets the sea.


Blue crabs feed on almost anything they can catch. They are found as far north as Nova Scotia and as far south as the Gulf of Mexico. They live in lagoons and estuaries. An estuary is the point where a rivr meets the sea.

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Rachael went to Lauras house to swim in the pool. First, Rachael and Laura swimmed around underwater. Than, rachael went down the water slide. After that, Lauras dog jumped in the pool. Finally, Laura and Rachael got out of the pool and drank Lemonade.



Rachael went to Laura's house to swim in the pool. First, Rachael and Laura swam around underwater. Than, Rachael went down the water slide. After that, Laura's dog jumped in the pool. Finally, Laura and Rachael got out of the pool and drank lemonade.


500


Do you no Ryan did last weekend. He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan builded a huge sand castle. Then, he collect seashells and rocks After that, he goed swimming with his brother. Ryan has a wonderful time at the beach.



Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan built a huge sand castle. Then, hecollected seashells and rocks. After that, he went swimming with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.


500

I had gon to bed early that night All of a sudden I heard this loud crach. We looked out the window and were surprised A big tree had fallen across our yard We were very happy that the tree had not falen on our house because that would have been realy really bad. As we looked out the window we saw lightning hit the grass again. We thought it might make another tree fall down.


I had gone to bed early that nightAll of a sudden I heard this loud crash. We looked out the window and were surprised. A big tree had fallen across our yardWe were very happy that the tree had not fallen on our house because that would have been really really bad. As we looked out the window, we saw lightning hit the grass again. We thought it might make another tree fall down.