Preposition Panic
"Walk past until the big cinema."
Remove "until" (or "past"). You walk past an object, or until you reach it, but not both.
"Walk past the big cinema."
"Walk until the big cinema."
"You must to turn left at the lights."
Change to "You must turn..." Modal verbs (must, should, can) always take a bare infinitive without "to".
"You must turn left at the lights."
"Turn right, finally walk for two minutes. After that make sure to reach the elevator."
Change "finally" to a sequential connector like "then" or "after that". "Finally" should only be used for the very last step of the journey.
"Turn right, then walk for two minutes. After that make sure to reach the elevator."
"Pass the library, which it is a white building."
Change to "which is a white building." "Which" acts as the subject; adding "it" creates an incorrect double subject.
"Pass the library, which is a white building."
"The big blue house you will see on the left."
Change to "You will see the big blue house on the left." Classic object-subject-verb inversion error.
"You will see the big blue house on the left."
"Go straightly down on Main Street."
Change to "Go straight down Main Street." "Straight" is already an adverb here; "straightly" is incorrect. We also don't say "down on a street" when moving along it.
Go straight down Main Street.
"For to reach the museum, go straight."
Change to "To reach..." or "In order to reach..." Using "for + infinitive" to show purpose is a common error; it requires the infinitive of purpose (to + bare verb).
"To reach the museum, go straight." (Or: "In order to reach...")
"Although you see the supermarket, the park is right next to it."
Change to "When you see..." or "Once you see..." "Although" shows contrast/concession, which makes no logical sense in this sequence.
"When you see the supermarket, the park is right next to it." (Or: "Once you see...")
"You will see a hotel where has a fountain in front."
Change to "which/that has a fountain." "Where" refers to a location in/at which something happens, but here we need a subject pronoun for the verb "has". A complete sentence always needs to answer Who did What action.
"You will see a hotel which has a fountain in front." (Or: "...a hotel that has...")
"Finally, the destination will find by you."
Change to "you will find the destination" or "the destination will be found by you." The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb "be", accidentally implying the destination is doing the searching, so it makes no sense.
"Finally, you will find the destination." (Or: "...the destination will be found by you.")
"The cafe is at the corner from the bank."
Change to "on the corner" or "around the corner from the bank." "At the corner from" is grammatically incorrect.
"The cafe is on the corner from the bank." (Or: "around the corner from the bank.")
"Exit the station and immediately turning right."
Change to "and immediately turn right." Imperatives in a sequence must maintain parallel structure (exit and turn, keep it in the same tense).
"Exit the station and immediately turn right."
"Take the second exit at the roundabout, because you will see a pharmacy."
Change "because" to a result connector like ", where you will see..." or ". Then, you will see..." The pharmacy isn't the reason you take the exit; it's a landmark you encounter after doing so.
"Take the second exit at the roundabout, where you will see a pharmacy."
"The man which told me the directions was very helpful."
Change "which" to "who" or "that". "Which" cannot be used to refer to people.
"The man who told me the directions was very helpful." (Or: "...the man that told me...")
"Walk past the enough big tower."
Change to "the tower that is big enough" or "the large enough tower". Adjectives must be before "enough" (big enough), not the other way around.
"Walk past the big enough tower."
"Get into the bus at the next stop."
Change to "Get on the bus." We use "get on/off" for public transport where you can stand up (buses, trains, planes), and "get in/out of" for cars and taxis.
"Get on the bus at the next stop."
"I suggest you to take a taxi because it's far."
Change to "I suggest you take a taxi" or "I suggest taking a taxi." The verb suggest cannot be followed by an object + infinitive with "to".
"I suggest you take a taxi because it's far." (Or: "I suggest taking a taxi...")
"Turn right at the bar after you pass the school."
Chronological confusion. It should be rewritten to follow the actual order of actions: "Pass the school, then turn right at the bar." (Otherwise, the driver misses the turn waiting for the school).
"Pass the school, then turn right at the pub." (Reordered for chronological logic)
"Go to the end of the street where the station is located there."
Remove "there". "Where" already replaces the place adverb, making "there" redundant at the end of the clause.
"Go to the end of the street where the station is located." (Removed the redundant 'there')
"There are many shops on the street, making easy to get lost."
Change to "...making it easy to get lost." The pronoun "it" is required as an object before the adjective in this structure. Remember, a complete sentence needs to answer WHO did WHAT.
"There are many shops on the street, making it easy to get lost."
"Cross through the bridge and turn left."
Change to "Cross the bridge" or "Go across the bridge." "Cross through" is a redundant mix of cross and go through (which is used for enclosed spaces like tunnels or woods).
"You're better stop walking if it starts to rain."
Change to "You'd better stop" (You had better). "Had better" is a fixed modal phrase for advice; using the verb "to be" (you are) here is incorrect.
"You'd better stop walking if it starts to rain."
"Despite the map is old, it is still accurate."
Change to "Despite the map being old..." or "Although the map is old..." "Despite" must be followed by a noun, pronoun, or gerund (like 'being old'), not a full clause with a conjugated verb.
"Although the map is old, it is still accurate." (Or: "Despite the map being old...")
"The street, that is very narrow, leads to the main square."
Change "that" to "which". This is a non-defining relative clause (it adds extra info between commas), and "that" cannot be used in non-defining relative clauses.
"The street, which is very narrow, leads to the main square."
"Hardly had I turned the corner when did I see the monument."
Change to "...when I saw the monument." While the negative inversion at the start (Hardly had I...) is correct, the second half of the sentence should use standard word order, not question word order. *Negative inversion is commonly used to add DRAMA in English literature: "Little did they know..." It has a question-like order.
"Hardly had I turned the corner when I saw the monument."
"Hardly had I turned the corner when I saw the monument."