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kyren want to krogers and bought aggs
what is Kyren is not capitalized, eggs are spelled wrong and Kroger's s also not capitalized also there's no period
I was walking in the dark then I saw a mysterious figure
what is first person point of view
there are about 8.3 billion people in the world
what is informational
Micheal got his pencil because he wanted to take his test but then he preferred to play on the computer with his friends
what is add a comma after but and also needs to add a period
john went to the store and saw this pretty girl and he thought I want to talk to this girl and they started talking and then they became friends
third person omniscent
the reason why you should stop drinking soda is because there's a high chance that you can get diabetes
what is persuasive
''There is no milk" she said "what are we going to do now"
what is there is supposed to be a comma after she said
I started talking to this guy and we made plans and we went out to eat and had a good time
first person
"Look" she said, "there right there in the cabnet"
what is instead of the first there it is suppose to be their, and cabnet is spelled like cabinet
you went to the park and saw people playing basketball and you joined them and had a good time
what is second person point of view