What's Wrong?
What is wrong with this sentence? There's two things.
Ive already had 3 donut's this morning!
I've already had 3 donuts this morning!
Is the following sentence correct or incorrect?
Mom said I had to clean my room, and then I could go play.
Correct.
What change if any needs to be made to this sentence?
The city of Manhattan is full of tall office buildings department stores theaters and restaurants.
A. Change is to are
B. Insert commas after buildings, stores, and theaters
C. Change and to or
D. Make no change
B. Insert commas after buildings, stores, and theaters
The city of Manhattan is full of tall office buildings, department stores, theaters, and restaurants.
(19) I could hear the fear in her voice, but I wasn't too worried. (20) Pam always made something out of nothing. (21) I was sure she was wrong. (22) She was starting to make me nervous. (23) I walked to the window to see for myself.
What is the BEST way to combine sentences 21 and 22?
A. I was sure she was wrong, for she was starting to make me nervous.
B. I was sure she was wrong, or she was starting to make me nervous.
C. I was sure she was wrong, but she was starting to make me nervous.
D. I was sure she was wrong, and she was starting to make me nervous.
C. I was sure she was wrong, but she was starting to make me nervous.
Go to the board and draw the rough draft paper
Introduction
Topic 1
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. or a heart
Topic 2
1.
2.
3.
4.
5. or a heart
Conclusion
What is wrong with this sentence?
I read an article titled Monkey kingdom about spider monkeys in the rainforest.
Monkey kingdom should be capitalize because it is the title of an article.
MINTS
I read an article titled Monkey Kingdom about spider monkeys in the rainforest.
This is this sentence correct?
The dog whines, and yelps because he does not like cats.
Incorrect.
"yelps because he does not like cats" is not clear on who the subject is, so it is not independent (it's a fragment)
The dog whines and yelps because he does not like cats.
How does sentence this sentence need to be changed?
Your kitchen freezer is probably around 0 degrees Fahrenheit, but the Dots must be stored at a much colder temperature then that.
A. Change be stored to being stored
B. Change then to than
C. Change probably to probly
D. Sentence 4 does not need to be changed.
B. Change then to than
What is the BEST way to revise this sentence?
She stayed up late to sew gold silver and shell beads to Jane's fancy jacket.
A. She stayed up late to sew beads on the fancy jacket of Jane's.
B. To sew gold silver shell beads to Jane's fancy jacket, she stayed up late.
C. She stayed up late. She sewed fancy beads to Jane's jacket. The gold, silver, and shell beads made the jacket fancy.
D. She stayed up late to sew gold, silver, and shell beads to Jane's fancy jacket.
D. She stayed up late to sew gold, silver, and shell beads to Jane's fancy jacket.
What is topic 1 and topic 2 of this writing prompt?
READ the information in the box below.
We are learning all of the time. Some of our learning takes place in school, but much of what we learn is at home or in other places of situations.
THINK about all of the things you have learned about during your life.
WRITE about something you have learned and explain the reasons it is important to you.
Topic 1 - about
Topic 2 - why (the reasons means why!)
What is wrong with this sentence?
How is you're head feeling today?
You're should be changed to your because the head belongs to you.
How is your head feeling today?
Is the following sentence correct or incorrect?
Jamie loves to go swimming, and she also loves to play soccer.
Correct.
What change needs to be made in this sentence?
However, you’ll never found a crumb of the futuristic ice cream Dippin’ Dots in the freezers.
A. Change freezers to Freezers
B. Delete the comma after however
C. Change found to find
D. No change needs to be made.
C. Change found to find
You'll means you will, and that is future tense. Found is past tense.
What is the most effective way to combine sentences 14 and 15?
(14) You might be too lazy to go to a convenience store. (15) You can even get Dots delivered to your house.
A. If you are too lazy to go to a convenience store, you can even get Dots delivered to your house.
B. You might be too lazy to go to a convenience store because you can even get Dots delivered to your house.
C. You might be too lazy to go to a convenience store you can even get Dots delivered to your house.
D. Since you can even get Dots delivered to your house, you might be too lazy to go to a convenience store.
A. If you are too lazy to go to a convenience store, you can even get Dots delivered to your house.
READ the information in the box below.
There are many people that cross our paths in life. Sometimes we actually get to know them, bu other times we only know about them from the media.
THINK about all fo the people that you know or know about.
WRITE about a special person. Explain what makes this person special to you.
Topic 1 - about
Topic 2 - why (you are explaining WHY this person is special to you)
What is wrong with this sentence?
My dad is much taller then my mom.
Then needs to be changed to than because we are comparing.
My dad is much taller than my mom.
Is this sentence correct?
It’s cold outside and I can’t find my coat.
Incorrect.
We need a comma before and because both sides are independent.
It’s cold outside, and I can’t find my coat.
What change needs to be made in this sentence?
In fact, if a freezer lost power, the Dots would has to be thrown away within thirty minutes!
A. Change has to have
B. Change minutes to minute's
C. Delete the comma after fact
D. Change thrown to throne
A. Change has to have
What is the correct way to write sentences 5 and 6?
5) They are flash frozen. (6) Stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
A. They are flash frozen. Which are then stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
B. They are flash frozen and then stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
C. They are flash frozen, they are stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
D. They are flash frozen stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
B. They are flash frozen and then stored at negative 40 degrees Fahrenheit.
Which of the following is the best introduction sentence for this prompt: If you could choose an animal for a class pet, what would you choose and why?
A. If I could choose an animal for a class pet, it would be a bunny because they're cool.
B. I choose a bunny because they're sweet, cuddly, and fun to take care of.
C. If I could choose an animal for a class pet, it would be a bunny because I think everyone would enjoy it. Let me tell you why!
C. If I could choose an animal for a class pet, it would be a bunny because I think everyone would enjoy it. Let me tell you why!
What is wrong with this sentence?
All of my pencils erasers are missing.
(need to tell me exactly what needs to be fixed and where)
All of my pencils' erasers are missing.
The apostrophe comes after pencils to show ownership AND that there is more than one pencil (keyword "All")
Is this sentence correct?
I went down to the shore, and played in the water.
Incorrect.
Cover up and. Is "played in the water" a complete sentence? Nope!
What change if any should be made in this sentence?
Back in 2013, the Dippin’ Dots company decided people might want to eat its ice cream at places other than baseball games or amusement parks, so it began shipping freezers.
A. Change people to People
B. Change its to it's
C. Delete the comma after parks
D. Make no change
D. Make no change
(13) Back in 2013, the Dippin’ Dots company decided People might want to eat its ice cream at places other than baseball games or amusement parks, so it began shipping freezers. (14) You might be too lazy to go to a convenience store. (15) You can even get Dots delivered to your house. (16) They will be packed with a ton of dry ice. (17) Thirty cups of Dots will run you a cool $59.99 plus $9.99 shipping.
Shannon’s paper ends abruptly. Which sentence should Shannon add to the end of her paper?
A. The price includes the cost of the dry ice.
B. Ask your mom for some money.
C. “I love Dippin’ Dots!” I shouted.
D. This delicious and interesting dessert is definitely worth the price.
D. This delicious and interesting dessert is definitely worth the price.
Which of the following is the best conclusion sentence for this prompt: If you could choose an animal for a class pet, what would you choose and why?
A. As you can see, I choose a bunny because it's cute.
B. I choose a bunny cause it's awesome and I like bunnies.
C. In conclusion, I would choose a bunny for a class pet because it's an animal we can all hold and help take care of.
C. In conclusion, I would choose a bunny for a class pet because it's an animal we can all hold and help take care of.
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