Strategies
Short Response Writing
Examples
Figurative Language
Bonus
100

Use this to eliminate answers you know are wrong. 

Trash, Treasure, Gold

100

How many total points is a short response question worth?

2 points

100

This test is a piece of cake. Piece of cake means..

It is easy!

100

Time is a thief.

Metaphor (because it compares time to a thief without using "like" or "as")

100

When is the NYS ELA Test?

Wednesday & Thursday/ April 15th-16th

200

Use this when you need to double check an answer or section of the passage

Go back to the text / Reread

200

You have to include 2 of these in every written short response.

Text Details
200

"Raccoons have many traits that help them survive. They can see well at night, so they hunt at night to avoid humans and other dangers. They also have specialized fingers."  The main idea is...

Raccoons have many traits to help them survive.

200

The leaves danced in the breeze.

Personification (because it gives human qualities, "danced," to the leaves).

200

What kind of food should you eat prior to taking the NYS test?

Nutritious food! Fruits/ Veggies/ Whole Grains/ Lean Proteins.

300

Use this to note key terms in a question or details in a text.

Highlight / Annotate 

300

True or False: Grammar and correct spelling are worth points on a short response.

False. 

Grammar & Spelling do not count.

300

"Sam thought he could win the basketball game all on his own. He tried and tried but it was no use. Finally, he started working with his team. Once the team worked together they won the game!" What is the central message?

Teamwork makes the dreamwork.

300

I’ve told you a million times.

Hyperbole (an exaggerated statement not meant to be taken literally).

300

How many hours of sleep should you get the night before the NYS test?

8 hours or more.

400

Do this to get a "head start" on the questions.

Preview the questions before reading the text.

400

What should the first sentence of your short response do?

Restate the question (reworded into a statement)

400

"Mary studied really hard for her test. She paid attention in class and did all of her homework. When she didn't understand a topic she asked the teacher for help. When test day came, she breezed through it and got 100%!" The lesson of this story is..

Hard work pays off. 

400

Peter Piper picked a peck of pickled peppers.

Alliteration (repetition of the "p" sound at the beginning of words).

400

True or False: You are allowed to used certain electronic devices such as airpods or apple watches during the NYS test.

False: You cannot use any electronic devices during the NYS test.

500

When trying to determine the meaning of an unfamiliar term/phrase - use this by reading words around the term/phrase

Context/ Context Clues

500

The best way to ensure full credit on a written short response question is to include ___________________

Restate, Answer, Two Pieces of Evidence, Explanation

500

"When bright artificial lights shine near a beach, baby sea turtles often become disoriented. Since they naturally follow the brightest light to find the ocean, these distracting city lights lead them toward dangerous roads instead of the water. Consequently, many hatchlings struggle to reach their safe home in the deep sea." How is this passage organized?

Artificial lights cause baby sea turtles to struggle to reach the sea.

Cause and effect

500

What TYPES of figurative language are shown here:
The wind howled like a wolf in the night. 

Simile (because it uses "like" to compare the wind to a wolf). 

Personification (the wind can not howl).

500

Where will you be taking the NYS ELA test?

A classroom