Sad Openers
Has the wind hit the sand, and the palm trees blew through the wind. The ocean waves smashing into the beach, the seagulls fly around the beach with the sky without a cloud in miles.
Setting
Please said the man. Help
"Please, help," said the man.
The pavilion was a simple city, long and rectangular.
Adjectives out-of-order
He is busy as a bee.
Simile
Boom! Superman flashes through the wall against The Joker. He lifts up a car and throws it through the sky.
Action
"Hey" can you help me"? said the child.
"Hey, can you help me?" said the child.
During the first week of fourth grade, Mrs. Parker, our teacher, mad ethe two tallest boys Eric and me, the cookie monitors.
Appositives
I am so fast, I can beat a car!
Hyperbole
The hurricane hits the kingdom of Astarita. With great force, destroying the capital city and the beautiful trees.
Setting
"What! said Leo.
"What!" said Leo.
His heart beating very fast, Harry stood listening to the chilly silence.
Absolutes
Break a leg!
Idiom
"Hey where were you?" said Leo.
Dialogue
"How did you do that!' said the teacher.
"How did you do that!" said the teacher.
The wind howled the bus, and the wipers sloshed heavily back and forth across the windshield, smearing the city in a red and yellow neon wetness.
Vivid Verbs
The train rushed towards the baby. That cried and cried.
Action
"What can I do then" said the teenager.
"What can I do then," said the teenager
The poems the students made, Harrison and Jared, made the teacher cry.
Appositives
She sells seashells by the seashore.
Alliteration