Sad Opener
Once there was this horrible virus named covid 19. Then, there was this little girl who was perfectly healthy until she started coughing. Then she realized she had covid. So, she was sent to the hospital. Then she heard Ah from a room across from her and wondered what it was. Then said, "I wonder who is screaming".
Hospital, AH, "I wonder who is screaming".
Find the error: Excuse me where is the classroom". Kayla asked
"Excuse me where is the classroom"? Kayla asked.
Find the Appositive: My cat, Mr. Mimi went for a walk.
Mr. Mimi
I'm so thirsty I could drink an ocean.
Hyperbole
A little boy named jack went on a hike to see this amazing view at the top of Mount Everest. As he was hiking, he heard BANG! Then some pieces of rock from the mountain started falling. So, he started running really fast. Then said, "no no please no I want to live".
Mount Everest, BANG, "No no please I want to live".
Find the error: "Miss Carter said" lets go to the beach.
Miss Carter said, "Let's go to the beach.
Find the Adj out of order: The maid washed the sheets with a blooming flower scent.
Blooming flower scent.
When I went home me and my dog had a conversation about his bed.
Personification
A long time ago it was Halloween and the little girl named Susie went into this pumpkin field. Then she heard a crack in one of the pumpkins. Then the pumpkins started coming towards her and she yelled "HELP SOMEONE HELP".
Pumpkin field, Crack, "HELP SOMEONE HELP".
"Is everyone ready for the field trip. Mrs. Willams asked.
Is everyone ready for the field trip, Mrs. Willams asked.
Find the Absolutes: Waves crashing swimmers diving, into the great blue sea.
Waves crashing and Swimmers diving.
She swims as fast as a fish.
Simile
Find the sad openers: Once this little boy found a mushroom forest and decided to go into the forest. RUFF the boy got scared when he heard that noise. Then the boy asked "Is there anyone there", then a little mushroom guy came out and hugged him.
Mushroom forest, RUFF, "Is there anyone there".
"Are you ready for the concert," said Makayla.
"Are you ready for the concert", asked Makayla.
Find the Vivid Verb: The window smashed as the earthquake hit the house.
Smashed
I can't believe there is cupcakes falling from the sky.
Idom
Find the sad openers: Once there was a deep dark cave were a young girl wandered into. All the sudden she heard loud footsteps coming toward her. "Hello" said the little girl nervously. All she heard was a scream.
Deep dark cave, footsteps coming toward her, "Hello".
Layla asked What did you do this weekend?
Layla asked, "What did you do this weekend.
Find the Appositives: During Volleyball, our coach, Sophie, told Alexa and Millie how to serve the ball.
Sophie, Alexa, Millie.
boom,track,crack.
Onomatopoeia