brushstrokes
figurative language
dialogue
sad opener
100

The dog, a German Shepard, barked at me

Appositives

100

Break a leg

Idiom

100

What time is it." asked my mom.

"What time is it?" asked my mom.

100

In a deep, dark forest in a distant kingdom there was a mansion built of warm red stone.

Setting

200

Feet running, the dog ran around the yard

Absolutes

200

POW!

Onomatopoeia

200

How old are you? I asked

"How old are you?" I asked.

200

BANG! A plate hit the wall, CRASH! A glass shattered on the floor.

Action

300

The bull, large and angry, bull charged at me

Adjectives Out of Order

300

His teeth were as yellow as the sun

Simile

300

"Thank you, she said

"Thank you," she said.

300

"Aria!" yelled her mom. "Get down here right now!"

Dialogue

400

I dashed to the finish line

Vivid Verbs

400

The dog waved to his owner

Personification

400

do you want to play soccer? my brother asked me.

"Do you want to play soccer?" my brother asked.

400

Face sweating, legs pumping, the boys sailed through the crowd of runners and streaked across the rain-soaked finish line.

Action

500

My sister, Zayla, ran to the bus stop

Appositives

500

I'm so hungry I could eat a million horses

Hyperbole

500

"when is your birthday, she asked.

"When is your birthday?" she asked.

500

The big yellow sun shone on the beautiful blue ocean. The tall palm trees hung overhead as I walked across the white sand.

Setting