Figurative language
Brushstrokes
dialogue
SAD Openers
100

I was as fast as a cheetah.

Simile

100

palms sweating, knees shaking I stood at the end of the cliff.

absolute

100

" I failed my test today", groaned Alex. 

" I failed my test today," groaned Alex.

100

The desk crowded with pencil shavings and ink splotches on all the paper. trashcan overflowing with paper, balled up and crumpled.

setting

200

It is raining cats and dogs.

Idiom

200

The voltage hit his wet mouth like a sledge and stiffened him like a poker.

Vivid Verbs

200

don't be late, "Bill warned.

don't be late, "Bill warned."

200

I rushed down the stairs skipping every other one. My hands up high and waving them up above my head. 

Action

300

" I was eating Jumbo shrimp."

oxymoron

300

The dog small, and loud Barked at the children.

Adjectives out of order.

300

"I think your wrong" Dan said.

"I think your wrong," Dan said.

300

"Hudson!" I yelled, "come here this instant." "Fine" he mumbled.

Dialogue.

400

BAM! and the crowd goes wiled!

onomatopoeia

400

Dickerson a middle school 

Appositive

400

STOP," I yelled.

"STOP," I yelled.

400

The golden sun shined on the dry, yellow field as we drove home today, which made it look like a field of shining gems. 

setting 

500

I'm so hungry I could eat a horse.

Hyperbole

500

The astronaut a space explorer 

Appositive

500

"I pads are the wave of the future, "declared Clarissa," there's no doubt about it."

"I pads are the wave of the future "declared Clarissa," there's no doubt about it."

500

My phone vibrated 10 times before I snatched it from my bedside table and stuffed it into my pillowcase.

Action