Dialogue
"You make me angry," yelled my sister. 😡
"You make me angry!" yelled my sister.😡
The mountains eat the sun. 🌄
personification
His heart beating very fast, Harry stood there listening to deafening silence.
Absolutes
When I scrolled around the dark gloomy room to find the light, the ghost threw a vase at me!
setting
What is the mistake?
"Can we get sushi tonight" asked Kevin.
"Can we get sushi tonight?" asked Kevin.
As I walked into the room, the lights blinded me. 😑
Hyperbole
The high voltage hit his wet mouth like a sledge and stiffened him like a poker.
vivid verbs
My phone vibrated five times before I snatched it from my beside table and stuffed it into my pillowcase.
Action
I have no idea what I'm doing Jeff explained.
"I have no idea what I'm doing," Jeff explained.
She was busy as a bee. 🐝
simile
The dog-small, loud, and intimidating- barked at the children who walked down the street.🐶
Adjectivess out of order
"Hey, you want to get some ice cream?" the man said.
Dialogue
What is the mistake?
Hey!" yelled Maddie, " what you are doing today?"
"Hey!" yelled Maddie, "What you are doing today?"
BANG! the rock dropped. 🌑
onemonopia
I put on my helmet, obnoxious and blurry, it wobbled when I walked.
Adjectives Out-of-order
As I drove up to the beach, I glimpsed at the magical shining water and fresh golden sand. I could hear the swooshing water going back and forth. When I entered the shining water i could taste the salty and bitterness.
Setting
Dialogue what is he mistake?
"I like pizza" said Eric, "but I also like burgers."
"I like pizza," said Eric, "but I like burgers."
Bob's burgers has the best buns. 🍔
Allerteration
Just like my brother, Gabe, we both like tacos.
appositives
When I gripped the handless of my bike and rushing against the howling rain, I saw a glimpse of a dog in a superman costume. 😂🐶🦸♂️
Action