grammar
vocabulary
construction
miscellanous
100

To don't be manipulated, you must be humble

not to be manipulated

100

The author establishes a parallel of these two periods. 

between

100

People hunted the witches for burn them.

People hunted the witches to burn them.

100

In the twenty's century

in the twentieth century

200

The government are created the HUAC

The government created the HUAC

200

Witch hunting always exist today

Witch hunting still exist today

200

The goal of the government it’s find all the communists

The goal of the government is to find all the communists

200

we need to recognise our vulnerability to protect himself.

ourselves

300

You were arrested even if you don’t have commit crime

You were arrested even if you did not commit any crime

300

The witch hunt is diffused faster with social media

spread

300

This organization are for goal to find the communists

This organization goal is to find the communists

300

I agree with they, the discrimination didn’t should existed

I agree with them, O discrimination should not exist.

400

Nowadays the witch hunt evolved

Nowadays the witch hunt has evolved.

400

With social media, misinformation goes speedly.

fast / quiclky

400

McCarthyism consist to accused people to being communists

McCarthyism consists in accusing people of being communists

400

we need collective action for don't be vulnerable

not to be

500

You can think it’s the past, but no. Did it change after time passed? No.

but it is not.

no it did not.

500

the actual witch hunt is utilised on social media ( 2 errors)

today's wich hun / is used

500

the author's would protect people innocent to the manipulation. ( 4 errors)

the author wants to protect innocent people against any manipulation. 

500

Today social media are worst that Middle Ages

worse than