Parallel Structures
Colons and Semicolons
Dangling Modifier Errors
Unnecessary Phrases
Transition words and phrases
100

Select any words that are parallel to the italicized word(s).

The weather and scenery of Brazil made Simba want to return soon.

scenery

100

Fix any punctuation or capitalization errors below. If it is okay as is, say "okay."

Some of the kickballs were in Rafiki's garage; others were still out in the field. 

okay as is :)

100

Determine the word, clause, or phrase that modifies the word(s) that are italicized.

Lord Voldemort, who gets the hiccups when he's nervous, brought a bottle of water to the spelling bee.


who gets the hiccups when he's nervous

100

Determine the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

Olaf's only role is to provide funny comic relief.


funny comic

100

Select the best transition words or phrases in the text below.

In spite of     In addition to      In contrast to     

In comparison

to reducing the amount of nightly homework assigned, teachers should make homework optional. This strategy would reduce students' stress levels and, on the other hand,

on the other hand, firstly, nevertheless, as a result,

increase their desire to learn. 

In addition to

as a result

200

Select any words that are parallel to the italicized word(s).

Mrs. Wippel was both hungry and thirsty after carrying the large goat up the steps.

thirsty

200

Fix any punctuation or capitalization errors below. If it is okay as is, say "okay."

This is the problem we need Katniss Everdeen's phone to record the video.

Need colon after problem

200

Determine the word, clause, or phrase that modifies the word(s) that are italicized.

I knew my party was going well when I saw Primrose Everdeen leading a conga line.


leading a conga line

200

Determine the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

If you think about it, parents should not be allowed to help students with homework.


If you think about it,

200

Select the best transition words or phrases in the text below.

Dogs and people have been working together since humans were hunter-gatherers living in caves. Back in those days, a person could use a dog’s powerful sense of smell to find food. In addition, Still, Therefore, On the other hand, dogs were able to serve as vacuum cleaners, keeping camps clean by eating scraps that had fallen to the ground. 

In addition

300

Select any words that are parallel to the italicized  word(s).


Neville Longbottom is either sleeping or coloring right now.


sleeping

300

Fix any punctuation or capitalization errors below. If it is okay as is, say "okay."

My plan was straightforward; Walk right up to Mufasa and ask for his autograph.

Need a colon ":" after "straightforward"

300

Determine the word, clause, or phrase that modifies the word(s) that are italicized.

Lucius Malfoy had to cross a rickety bridge to reach the remote village.


rickety

300

Determine the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

Guy is not made happier by gaining knowledge.


is not made happier

300

Select the best transition words or phrases in the text below.

Similar to how Though After Because 

it is over 70 years old, the board game Monopoly is still one of the most popular on the market. 

For example, In fact, As a result, Nevertheless,

many would argue that the game has gotten more popular over time. 

Though


In fact

400

Select any words that are parallel to the italicized word(s).

My friend remarked that Cho Chang was brilliant, good-looking, and friendly.


good-looking, friendly

400

Fix any punctuation or capitalization errors below. If it is okay as is, say "okay."

The stamps in Cho Chang's collection are of great quality, They are also hard to find.

need a semicolon ";" after quality and lowercase "they"

400

Determine the word, clause, or phrase that modifies the word(s) that is italicized.

Timon spilled his frozen yogurt all over the kitchen floor.


his frozen

400

Determine the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

The king and queen are the real villains in Frozen because Elsa is kept prisoner by them.


is kept prisoner by

400

Select the best transition words or phrases in the text below.

Mount Everest is so tall that it reaches the “jet stream,” strong air currents that flow a few miles above Earth. Meanwhile,

Meanwhile, In summary, As a result, In addition,

climbers can face powerful, freezing winds faster than 200 miles per hour. 

As a result

500

Select any words that are parallel to the italicized word(s).

During the Super Bowl, Pumba plans on watching, but not eating.


watching

500

Fix any punctuation or capitalization errors below. Click "Submit Answer" if there are none.

Professor Moody spilled grape juice on his new jacket, the store owner allowed him to return it anyway.

need a semicolon ";" after "jacket"

500


Determine the word, clause, or phrase that modifies the word(s) that are italicized.

During the meeting, Ginny Weasley thought that the spy laughed nervously.


nervously

500


Determine the word or phrase that makes the thesis statement wordy.

I believe Harry and Draco Malfoy are more similar than they are different.


I believe

500

Select the best transition words or phrases in the text below.

Camouflage has long been used as a battle tactic. 

On the other hand, Next, Similarly, For example,

 during World War I, German soldiers would paint their horses white. 

Earlier As a result, Similarly, For example,

the animals would blend in with the snow and be more difficult for the enemy to spot. 

For example 

As a result