General questions
Identify the H.I.P.T.
Identify the T.I.E.E.
Identify the R.S.E.
100

Opinon-Reason-Evidence/Example-Opinion Again (OREO) paragraphs are used in persuasive essays.

True or False

False: Opinon-Reason-Evidence/Example-Opinion Again (OREO) paragraphs are used alone, often in short answer responses.

100

Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is on a phone, television or billboard, advice for improving health bombards them. This advice is often motivated by profit, but some of it is genuinely concerned about people's health. A regular exercise program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it, provides numerous benefits. Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

A regular exercise program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it, provides numerous benefits.

Position/Opinion statement
100

The first of benefit of exercise, the release of tension, is immediate. Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear. Doctors agree that participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day. Planned physical exercise, therefore, is a healthy way to relieve stress-related tension.

Planned physical exercise, therefore, is a healthy way to relieve stress-related tension.

E = Ending

100

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

E = Expand

200

What does the I in H.I.P.T stand for? (2 words)


The I stands for Issue Statement.

200

Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is on a phone, television or billboard, advice for improving health bombards them. This advice is often motivated by profit, but some of it is genuinely concerned about people's health. A regular exercise program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it, provides numerous benefits. Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

This advice is often motivated by profit, but some of it is genuinely concerned about people's health.

Issue/Topic Statement

200

The first of benefit of exercise, the release of tension, is immediate. Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear. Doctors agree that participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day. Planned physical exercise, therefore, is a healthy way to relieve stress-related tension.

The first of benefit of exercise, the release of tension, is immediate.

Topic Sentence

200

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. 

R = Restate the Thesis

300

The Restate Thesis-Summary-Expansion (R.S.E.) paragraph is usually used in the _______________ paragraph of a persuasive essay.

a. introduction

b. body

c. conclusion

The Restate Thesis-Summary-Expansion (R.S.E.) paragraph is usually used in the conclusion paragraph of a persuasive essay.

300

Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is on a phone, television or billboard, advice for improving health bombards them. This advice is often motivated by profit, but some of it is genuinely concerned about people's health. A regular exercise program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it, provides numerous benefits. Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is on a phone, television or billboard, advice for improving health bombards them. 

Hook

300

The first of benefit of exercise, the release of tension, is immediate. Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear. Doctors agree that participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day. Planned physical exercise, therefore, is a healthy way to relieve stress-related tension.

Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear.

I = Introduction of evidence

300

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy.

S = Summary 

400

What is one way you can expand in the concluding paragraph? In other words, what is one final gift you can leave the reader with?

- a question to ponder

- a call to action

- a connection to the bigger picture

400

Almost everywhere people turn, whether it is on a phone, television or billboard, advice for improving health bombards them. This advice is often motivated by profit, but some of it is genuinely concerned about people's health. A regular exercise program, if it consists of at least thirty minutes three times a week and if a person's physician approves it, provides numerous benefits. Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

Regular exercise releases tension, improves appearance, and increases stamina.

Thesis statement

400

The first of benefit of exercise, the release of tension, is immediate. Tension builds in the body because of an overaccumulation of adrenaline produced by stress, anxiety, or fear. Doctors agree that participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day. Planned physical exercise, therefore, is a healthy way to relieve stress-related tension.

Doctors agree that participating in an active sport such as tennis or volleyball for thirty minutes releases tension. If a person swims, jogs or rides a bicycle for half that time, he or she should sleep better at night and have a better temperament the next day.

E = Explaining evidence
400

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

What kind of final gift is this?

However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

Final gift = A call to action

500

You must write strictly following the models and guidelines Mr. Mulvihill provided.

a. True

b. False

False: This is to help you develop your writing!

500

Gas prices continue to increase, the economy is falling apart, and the environment is changing for the worst. These problems can be related to two things, the cost of fuel and the inefficient vehicles people drive. Society should demand that the automobile manufacturers produce more fuel efficient vehicles. If more efficient vehicles were made, it could help improve the environment, promote the country's economy, and advance technology.

How many paragraphs will this essay likely have?

If more efficient vehicles were made, it could help improve the environment, promote the country's economy, and advance technology.

3 body paragraphs + intro + conclusion = 5 paragraphs

500

An improved appearance, which is a second benefit of regular exercise, is not as immediately apparent as feeling better. Exercise takes perhaps a month or longer to show its results in a trimmer, firmer figure. Improvement, however, will come. A person who is ten pounds overweight, for instance, may be able during this time to burn away most excess fat and to tighten muscles, thereby reshaping the physique. Having improved muscle tone and even posture, he or she will wear clothes more attractively and comfortably. Combined with a sensible diet, an exercise program will also improve a person's skin tone. This improved appearance will provide confidence and favorably impress others.

Exercise takes perhaps a month or longer to show its results in a trimmer, firmer figure. Improvement, however, will come.

I = Introduction of evidence/example

500

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities. Although easy solutions to the goals of losing weight and achieving an attractive, energetic body saturate the media, actually acquiring these benefits is not easy. However, every difficult task needs a first step. Take yours today!

This essay was probably ______ paragraphs.

This essay was probably 5 paragraphs.

It is worth the effort to find an established exercise program that will make a person feel relaxed, look healthy, and have adequate strength for strenuous as well as routine activities.