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For my final project, I’m going to focus on different color theories. (1)

For my final project, I am going to focus on different color theories. (1)

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My design training included color theory, narration, software courses…

My design training included color theory, narration, and software courses.

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The final result was both humorous and visualy exciting.

visually

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A lot of country are recognized for their distinct cultural heritages.

A lot of countries are recognized for their distinct cultural heritages.

100

I realized my project with a team of four designers.

I created/ completed/ finalized my project with a team of four designers.

200

We chose to research traditional silk weaving in thailand. (1)

We chose to research traditional silk weaving in Thailand. (1)

200

There are bright colors, geometrical lines, and fluid shapes included in the poster.

The poster includes bright colors, geometrical lines, and fluid shapes.

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The main scene of the play is hapening in a Victorian mansion.

happening
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Many persons attends the art gallery opening on Jeff Koons.

Many people attends the art gallery opening on Jeff Koons.

200

We used the typography “Helvatica” because of its sleek and universal design.

We used the font “Helvatica” because of its sleek and universal design.

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We entitled our project : «Female Hierarchy». (2)

We entitled our project"Female Hierarchy". (2)

300

Our project incorporated many green shades, such as olive, emerald, etc.

Our project incorporated many green shades, such as olive, emerald, and pine green.

300

The interior is spaceous, collorful, and saturated with light.

colorful/ colourful

300

We designed the French team’s uniform for the Olympics Games.

We designed the French team’s uniform for the Olympic Games.

300

I demand that you consider my candidacy by reading my portfolio, résumé, and cover letter.

I request/ ask that you consider my candidacy by reading my portfolio, résumé, and cover letter.

400

Samuel, Katrina and i collaborated on a screenprinting project. (2)

Samuel, Katrina, and I collaborated on a screenprinting project. (2)

400

I completed this project during my second year at the EDNA.

I completed this project during my second year at the École de Design Nantes Atlantique.

400

Our story was inspired by the litterature of Hemingway and Steinbeck.

literature

400

Our student charity event raised over five thousands dollars.

Our student charity event raised over five thousand dollars.

400

My formation includes design, mathematics, computer, and language courses.

My studies/ education includes design, mathematics, computer, and language courses.

500

Justin and gloria were chosen as co-presidents for the student arts society in september. (5)

Justin and Gloria were chosen as co-presidents for the Student Arts Society in September. (5)

500

I am currently a student of design specializing in print media.

I am currently a design student specializing in print media.

500

For our transport project we designed a modular vehicule that works both on land and sea.

vehicl

500

We completed a lot of researches to discover the public’s preferences.

We completed a lot of research to discover the public’s preferences.

500

This portfolio will resume the major projects I have completed during my studies.

This portfolio will summarize the major projects I have completed during my studies.