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100
Coach Kelly is a man who is well known across campus.
Coach Kelly is well known across campus.
100
We made our way to the eatery located behind the dining hall on south quad.
We walked to Reckers.
100
Sam and Ana do not usually sit on the left side of the room.
Sam and Ana usually sit on the right side of the room.
100
My first trip to the grotto will always be remembered by me.
I will always remember my first trip to the grotto.
100
We noticed a patch of mud on the field that was right on the 50 yard line.
We noticed a patch of mud on the 50 yard line of the field.
200
There is no doubt that Notre Dame is the best school in the world.
No doubt Notre Dame is the best school in the world.
200
We browsed a selection of different boxed breakfast grains.
We shopped for cereal.
200
We did not pay any attention to the loud music in the quad.
We ignored the loud music in the quad.
200
The paper was covered with marks from the teacher.
The teacher covered the paper with marks.
200
The irish cheerleaders, during the game, led the students in a cheer.
During the game, the irish cheerleaders led the students in a cheer.
300
We were unaware of the fact that the Coach Kelly changed the policy regarding the alma mater after losses.
We were unaware that Coach Kelly changed the policy regarding the alma mater after losses.
300
Many students will sculpt large orange fruits for use as decorative pieces on All Hallow's Eve.
Many students carve pumpkins for Halloween decorations.
300
We did not remember to bring our homework to class.
We forgot to bring our homework to class.
300
The food was served by the concession stand worker.
The concession stand worker served the food.
300
There was recently an article about the Irish Guard published in "The Observer".
There was recently an article published in "The Observer" about the Irish Guard.
400
Tommy Reese threw two interceptions against Pittsburgh, which was our last opponent.
Tommy Reese threw two interceptions against Pittsburgh, our last opponent.
400
The person with whom I co-habitate continues to illuminate our living space while I am trying to undergo cycles of rapid eye movement.
My roommate leaves the light on while I am trying to sleep.
400
Our room is not organized.
Our room is disorganized.
400
The shirt is worn by all students at every game.
All students wear the shirt at every game.
400
The policy of the athletic department, which was under review, may be changed soon.
The athletic department's policy, which was under review, may be changed soon.
500
In spite of the fact that we lost to Pittsburgh, we are confident that we will beat BYU.
Though we lost to Pittsburgh, we are confident that we will beat BYU.
500
The feature that most people know about is the warm metallic colored copula that rests atop the central building of the campus.
The most well-known landmark on campus is the golden dome of the main building.
500
It is bad to not be honest in your academic work.
It is bad to be dishonest in your academic work.
500
Loud cheers were made by the students at the game as a touchdown was scored by the Irish.
The students cheered loudly as the Irish scored a touchdown.
500
We only lost three games (so far). ;)
We lost only three games (so far). ;)