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100

The herd of cows ran alongside a flock of geese, with them running faster.

The herd of cows ran alongside a flock of geese, with the geese running faster.

100

While making dinner, Jim dropped it on the ground.

While making dinner, Jim dropped the plates on the ground.

100

During the two-day festival El Dia de los Muertos (Day of the Dead), Mexican families celebrate loved ones who have died.

Correct

300

When the glass was set atop the coffee table, it toppled to the ground.

When the glass was set atop the coffee table, the glass toppled to the ground.

300

While cutting lengths of cardboard, Jim painted them with blue paint.

While cutting lengths of cardboard, Jim painted the cardboard with blue paint.

300

According to Jim, in the manual it says to restart the device.

According to Jim, the manual says to restart the device.

300

Jim, which house is on fire, tries to put it out. 

Jim, whose house is on fire, tries to put it out.

500

When Eddie and Ido were strolling in the park, he threw some stones.

When Eddie and Ido were strolling in the park, they threw some stones. / When Eddie and Ido were strolling in the park, Eddie threw some stones.

500

At the restaurant, I accidentally spilled it onto my lap.  

At the restaurant, I accidentally spilled my drink onto my lap.  

500

Jim spoke about time management yesterday. They all agree that it was exceptionally boring.

Jim spoke about time management yesterday. The audience agrees that the speech was exceptionally boring.

600

The Renaissance marked a rebirth of classical ideas and a transition from the middle ages to modernity. Given the influence on the world that this had, it is a central event in history. 

The Renaissance marked a rebirth of classical ideas and a transition from the middle ages to modernity. Given the influence on the world that the Renaissance had, it is a central event in history.

600

These words should not be used to refer to persons

which, that

700
Given the amount of successful technology companies, many people have come to California in search of opportunities. This has caused an increase in the population of California.

Given the amount of successful technology companies, many people have come to California in search of opportunities. This phenomenon has caused an increase in the population of California.