"Fix Me" Uppers
This book is her's, not your's. (2)
This book is hers, not yours.
The girl left home drove to school and forgot her house keys.
The girl left home, drove to school and forgot her house keys.
The shoes, shirt, pants and belt are in my car, said Sarah.
"The shoes, shirt, pants and belt are in my car," said Sarah.
She is a bear in the mornings.
metaphor
Its a great day to be alive.
It's a great day to be alive.
Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfreds events were somewhat boring. (1)
Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfred's events were boring.
The boys ran hard yet they lost.
The boys ran hard, yet they lost.
The farmer described, there are dogs, cats and goats roaming the farm.
The farmer described, "There are dogs, cats and goats roaming the farm."
Sally sailed southward towards Spain.
Alliteration
Ms. Changs hat is not ready for pick-up.
Ms. Chang's hat is not ready for pick up.
It's campus is beautiful, and its quiet there. (2)
Its campus is beautiful, and it's quiet there.
The mother could not find her child so she called the police.
The mother could not find her child, so she called the police.
The entertainment reporter said in his segment, Cher went to the show, avoided the press and sang her heart out.
The entertainment reporter said in his segment, "Cher went to the show, avoided the press and sang her heart out."
Pow! Batman punched the Joker.
Onomatopoeia
The Traynors dog barks non-stop.
What is The Traynor's dog barks non-stop.
Most of the girls displays were organized, but Tess display was a mess. (2)
Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess's display was a mess. Or Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess' was a mess.
When she went to the movies she realized she forgot her I.D. for the discount.
When she went to the movies, she realized she forgot her I.D. for the discount.
Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible and she almost killed us three times! exclaimed the driving instructor.
"Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible and she almost killed us three times!" exclaimed the driving instructor.
The leaves danced in the wind.
personification
Shes her own worst enemy, and her problems dont help her case.
She's her own worst enemy, and her problems don't help her case.
The Mother searched high and low for her sons toy. She looked under the bed, sofa, and table. (3)
The mother searched high and low for her son's toy. She looked under the bed, sofa and table.
Their test would be on January 20th 2023 at 1 p.m.
Bad Blood and Blank Space are both on Taylor Swift's album 1989.
"Bad Blood" and "Blank Space" are both on Taylor Swift's album 1989.
Her smile was as bright as the sun.
simile
That toy in the schools sandbox is my sisters.
That toy in the school's sandbox is my sister's.