Show:
"Fix Me" Uppers
Where in the world is "Comma" San Diego?
Series-ously?
What the what's wrong?
Apostrophes
100
This book is her's, not your's.
What is: This book is hers, not yours.
100
The girl left home and she forgot her keys.
What is: The girl left home, and she forgot her keys
100
The shoes shirt pants and belt are in my car.
What is: The shoes, shirt, pants, and belt are in my car.
100

The tent, chairs and tailgate food are packed in the car.

What is: Missing comma after chairs (Oxford comma)

100
Its a great day to be alive.
What is: It's a great day to be alive.
200
Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfreds events were somewhat boring.
What is: Most of the events at the car show were fun, but Alfred's events were boring.
200
The boys ran hard yet they lost.
What is: The boys ran hard, yet they lost.
200
There are dogs, cats and goats roaming the farm.
What is: There are dogs, cats, and goats roaming the farm.
200

The brother and sister are friends, they like to play outside together.

What is: A run-on. Needs a period after friends OR a comma FANBOY to combine OR semicolon to combine

200

Ms. Charles hat is not ready for pick-up.

What is: Ms. Charles's hat is not ready for pick up.

300
It's campus is beautiful, and its quiet there.
What is: Its campus is beautiful, and it's quiet there.
300
The mother could not find her child so she called the police.
What is: The mother could not find her child, so she called the police.
300
Cher went to the show avoided the press and sang her heart out.
What is: Cher went to the show, avoided the press, and sang her heart out.
300

The book was hard to read its diction was strange.

What is: needs a semicolon after "read"

300

The branches leaves fell early in October. 

What is: The branches' leaves fell early in October. 

400

Most of the girls displays were organized, but Tess display was a mess.

What is: Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess's display was a mess. Or Most of the girls' displays were organized, but Tess's was a mess.

400

When Suzanne my forgetful sister went to the airport she realized that she forgot her I.D.

What is: When Suzanne, my forgetful sister, went to the airport, she realized that she forgot her I.D.

400
Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible and she almost killed us three times.
What is: Her driving was horrendous, her signaling was terrible, and she almost killed us three times.
400

Buried under the ground.

What is: A fragment. Not a complete sentence at all.

400

Shes her own worst enemy, and Agnes problems dont help her case.

What is: She's her own worst enemy, and Agnes's problems don't help her case.

500

The mother searched high and low, and looked hard for the toys.

What is: The mother searched high and low and looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low; she looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low, and she looked hard for the toys. OR The mother searched high and low. She looked hard for the toys.

500

When the boys left home. She snuck into their room grabbed a blanket doused it in lighter fluid and then burned it in the backyard. 

What is: When the boys left home, she snuck into their room, grabbed a blanket, doused it in lighter fluid, and then burned it in the backyard. 

500
She walked outside and fed the birds birdseed watched them gobble it down and noticed how they took it back to their nests when they were finished.
What is: She walked outside and fed the birds birdseed, watched them gobble it down, and noticed how they took it back to their nests when they were finished.
500

"The boy left the house," Thomas pleaded, "He is not here at all, so you can now leave!"

What is: The comma after pleaded should be a period.

500

That is my sisters favorite song, and they listen to it non-stop on Dads stereo.

What is: That is my sisters' favorite song, and they listen to it non-stop on Dad's stereo.