Revising & Editing
What is the MOST effective way for Jose to combine sentences 3 and 4?
(3) A classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot. (4) In most cases, this would seem unrealistic.
A. A classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot, and in most cases, this would seem unrealistic.
B. Because a classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot, in most cases, this would seem unrealistic.
C. A classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot, so in most cases this would seem unrealistic.
D. Since a classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot; in most cases, this would seem unrealistic.
A. A classic action movie features a car driving around and transforming into a robot, and in most cases, this would seem unrealistic.
What change should be made in sentence 3?
(3) One day, Angel will stood on business.
A. Change will to have
B. Change One to Once'
C. Change stood to stand
D. Change Angel to angel
C. Change stood to stand
What is the first thing that you do before you even start to type your essay?
Indent
What is the MOST effective way for Jose to combine 5 and 6?
(5) One day 30 years ago, a transformer near the Big Bend in Texas. (6) Might have thought that humans were really unpleasant.
A. A transformer might have believed over 30 years ago that humans were really unpleasant near the Big Bend in Texas one day.
B. The Big Bend in Texas one day over 30 years ago was really unpleasant in a way a transformer might have thought.
C. Humans were really unpleasant near the Big Bend in Texas for a transformer over 30 years ago one day.
D. One day 30 years ago, a transformer near the Big Bend in Texas might have thought that humans were really unpleasant.
D. One day 30 years ago, a transformer near the Big Bend in Texas might have thought that humans were really unpleasant
What change should be made in sentence 8?
(8) I saw there cousin at the store yesterday.
A. Change there to they're
B. Change the to thee
C. Change saw to seen
D. Change there to their
D. Change there to their
How would you restate this question/prompt?
Explain how the author supports the thesis that Eduardo is "more than just a boy"
The author supports the thesis that Eduardo is "more than just a boy" by
Which sentence is extraneous and should be deleted?
Roses are one of the most popular flowers in the world. They come in a variety of colors, each with its own symbolic meaning. For example, red roses symbolize love and passion, while yellow roses represent friendship. The process of photosynthesis in plants involves converting sunlight into energy. Many people give roses on special occasions, such as anniversaries and Valentine’s Day.
A. Roses are one of the most popular flowers in the world.
B. They come in a variety of colors, each with its own symbolic meaning.
C. For example, red roses symbolize love and passion, while yellow roses represent friendship.
D. The process of photosynthesis in plants involves converting sunlight into energy.
D. The process of photosynthesis in plants involves converting sunlight into energy.
What change, if any, should be made in sentence 10?
(10) Earth and mars are the only planets that can support human life.
A. Change mars to Mars
B. Change are to is
C. change planets to planet
D. Change human to Human
A. Change mars to Mars
How many pieces of text evidence do you need in your ECR ? Also, what punctuation marks do you use around your text evidence?
2, quotation marks
The children were excited to participate in the school’s annual field day. As soon as the whistle blew, they began to run toward the finish line with all their might. Some moved faster than others, but everyone was determined to do their best and enjoy the event.
Question:
Which word would be a more precise word to use than "run" in sentence 2?
Answer Choices:
A. prance
B. Jog
C. Dash
D. Gallop
C. Dash
What is the correct way to write sentence 12?
(12) One reason most kids don't go outside are they like to play video games.
A. They like to play video games are one reason they don't like to go outside.
B. One reason most kids don't go outside is they like to play video games.
C. Most kids don't go outside are another reason why they don't play video games.
D. One reason, most kids don't go outside, is they like to play video games.
B. One reason most kids don't go outside is they like to play video games.
TRUE or FALSE: You only need to do "R.A.C" for your ECR/essay
FALSE- you need to do R.A.C.E.S.
What is the correct way to write sentence 3?
(3) Sometimes, it is good to be by yourself there is so much going on in the world.
A. It is good to be by yourself, there is so much going on in the world, sometimes.
B. Sometimes, it is good to be by yourself since there is so much going on in the world.
C. Sometimes, it is good; to be by yourself because there is so much going on in the world.
D. There is so much, going on in the world, sometimes, it's good to be by yourself.
B. Sometimes, it is good to be by yourself since there is so much going on in the world.
(12) Tasha gets tired because she jumps too high and ran out out breath quick.
A. Change breath to breathe
B. Change ran to runs
C. Change gets to get
D. Change tired to tireded
B. Change ran to runs
What does the "S" stand for in R.A.C.E.S. and what is included in the "S"?
S- Sum it up; restate your answer