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100

 仿写 I want to talk about____________

 I want to talk about the book The Little Prince. 

100

XX is good. / I like XX because it is +形容词 形容词作表语,原因状语

The novel is great. I like the novel because it is moving.

100

But it has some problems. but转折简单句

The book is wonderful, but it has some problems.

100

I recommend XX. 基础主谓宾

I recommend The Little Prince.

200

I would like to write a review about sth.(固定搭配would like to do) would like+不定式,评论作文标配开头

I would like to write a review about The Little Prince.

200

 First, … Besides, …(衔接词+主系表) 基础衔接词串联两个简单句

First, the plot is exciting. Besides, the characters are vivid.

200

However, it has a few small drawbacks. 转折副词+主谓宾,drawback基础名词

The story is warm; however, it has a few small drawbacks.

200

All in all, XX is good. I recommend it to sb. 分两句简单句收尾

All in all, the book is good. I recommend it to primary students.

300

I would like to write a review about +名词, which +定语从句(修饰物品) 非限定性定语从句,补充事物特点

I would like to write a review about The Little Prince, which teaches people to keep childlike innocence.

300

To begin with, the biggest strength of XX is …; Besides, … 名词所有格+并列连词,优缺点专用名词strength

To begin with, the biggest strength of the novel is its deep theme; Besides, its language is easy to understand.

300

On the downside, the only flaw is that +宾语从句 that引导表语从句,flaw=缺点(书面)

On the downside, the only flaw is that some plots are too abstract for little kids.

300

All in all, XX is adj. Despite its small weakness, I recommend it to sb. despite+名词短语让步结构

All in all, the book is inspiring. Despite its small weakness, I recommend it to young readers.

400

时间状语(Last weekend/Last Friday)+主句, and I am writing… 并列句+现在进行时表写作目的

Last Sunday I finished reading The Little Prince, and I am writing a review of it.

400

To start with, 主语+be+adj.+to do; In addition,主语+be+adj.+but+adj. 不定式作补语,转折并列形容词

To start with, the book is easy to follow; In addition, its story is touching but realistic.

400

Nevertheless, XX contains too many …, which make … 非限定从句修饰前面整件事

Nevertheless, the book contains too many philosophical lines, which make beginners confused.

400

Overall, it is a +adj.+noun. Despite minor flaws, it is well worth doing. be worth doing固定搭配

Overall, it is a fantastic work. Despite minor flaws, it is well worth reading many times.

500

 In order to share my viewpoints on XX, I compose this review focusing on its pros and cons. 目的状语+现在分词作后置定语(高阶书面)

In order to share my viewpoints on The Little Prince, I compose this review focusing on its pros and cons.

500

One primary merit lies in its …; What further adds to its charm is that… 高级名词merit/merit,主语从句,替换普通strength

 One primary merit lies in its profound thought; What further adds to its charm is that it inspires readers to reflect on life. 

500

Despite its numerous merits, one noticeable defect consists in the fact that … despite介词让步+同位语从句,高阶缺陷defect

Despite its numerous merits, one noticeable defect consists in the fact that its ending leaves readers with unanswered questions.

500

Taking all factors into consideration, notwithstanding its trivial imperfections, this item deserves widespread recommendation among youngsters. 分词开头+高级介词notwithstanding+抽象名词

Taking all factors into consideration, notwithstanding its trivial imperfections, this book deserves widespread recommendation among youngsters.