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When we talk about revision, the "A" stands for. . .

What is add sentences, words, and/or vocabulary?

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____ deals with what a passage or sentence looks like, not what it sounds like. 

What is editing/edit? 

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Jeffery ain't never going to make it to the party. 

What is "is" or "isn't ever"?

100

Mr. frazier is ready to teach us today! 

What is capitalize "f" in "frazier"?

100

"Let it go! Let go! Can't hold it back anymore!" 

What is add "it" to "Let go!"?

200

_____ is all about what the passage SOUNDS like. 

What is revising/revision/revise?

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A "." "?" and "!" are examples of . . . 

What is punctuation?

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Please make sure that all every students are in class on time. 

What is remove "every"? 

200

Oh my goodness  That is incredible! 

What is add punctuation or "." or "!"? 

200
"You're welcome except what can I say?"

What is "What can I say except you're welcome!"?

300

When revising, if a word or sentence is in the wrong place, you should ____ it.

What is move?

300

This technique of editing is good in thes cituation. 

What is spelling?

300

I think we need it bad, really! 

What is move "really"?

300

Jeffery eat a lot of food. 

What is "eats"?

300

Little Mermaid "Shalalala my oh my, you to Smack the girl." 

What is "kiss" the girl? 

400

A thesaurus will help you _____ words for others when revising. 

What is substitute?

400

Making sure "a persons" matches "is walking" is an example of this strategy of C.U.P.S.

What is usage? 

400

That hamburger tomato, lettuce, onion, and pickles. 

What is add "has"?

400

Which word is spelled incorrectly? "Sceince is very important and will help us know more about carbon dioxide."

What is "science"?

400

Mulan "You must be swift as a coursing river. Don't be a man!" 

What is remove "don't"? 

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A common practice in revision is to _____ unneeded words or sentences. 

What is remove?

500

This strategy is crucial for the next sentence: I really should make sure "jake's Donut shop" is the correct way to write a name. 

What is capitalize/capitalization?

500

How I do do this? 

What is move "do"?

500
What punctuation is missing? "Tommy is really really excited to be here."

What is a "," after "really"?

500
Lion King "No worries, it means no worries for the rest of your days. It's our problem free philosophy, no worries."

What is substitute "Hakuna Matata"?