Revising EN
During the Academy Awards, also known as the Oscars, hundreds of actors and actresses came together. At this event, “La Ciudad de la Nieve” was given a very big award as the best international movie of 2023.
Which phrase should replace “very big” to make the sentence better?
1. Large
2. Important
3. Some huge
4. small
2. Important
Spot two mistakes:
My friend had a lot to share so most mornings I just listened and a giggle.
remove "a"
add a comma before "so"
FANBOYS rule :)
Que palabra sustituye mejor la palabra resaltada:
Su mama le conto que un Walkman era como el Spotify de antes.
a) del pasado
b) de mas atras
c) anterior
d) viejo
del pasado
Esta fundacion le dedica a recaudar fondos para ninos en situacion de calle.
cambiar "le" por "se"
John worked really hard on his research project for a long time, studying lots of details and looking at a ton of information. He put together a report that showed how well he understood the topic. His conclusions and arguments, based on the data he collected, made a strong case for what he found. John wanted to show his work. He decided to publish his findings on his Youtube channel. He knew it would become viral very quickly.
What is the BEST transition to add to the highlighted sentence?
1. Similarly
2. However
3. Therefore
4. Firstly
3. Therefore
Rewrite this sentence:
They got very excited about the trip they decided to purchase the tickets right away.
They got very excited about the trip and decided to purchase the tickets right away.
En el segundo parrafo necesitamos una transicion:
Lucía propuso la idea de organizar un evento de recaudación de fondos para ninos de calle. Marta se entusiasmó con la iniciativa pero se sintió abrumada sin saber por dónde empezar. Juntas, decidieron buscar orientación en el líder del grupo comunitario de la escuela.
El lider les proporcionó un manual que detallaba los pasos para organizar eventos de caridad y les reveló que no todos los eventos necesariamente implican grandes gastos.
A) Generalmente
B) Aun asi
C) Sin embargo
D) Al dia siguiente
D) Al dia siguiente
Encuantra el error:
Frente al edificio de la fundacion hay una estatua de grande tamano.
grande - gran
Ms. Moran began using her own money to purchase snacks for her students. She purchased candy too.
Rewrite this sentence so the ideas are not redundant or repeated.
Ms. Moran began using her own money to purchase snacks and candy for her students.
Spot the mistake:
In December 2019 I becomed a teacher.
becomed -> became
Reescribe esta oracion:
Asi, juntas trabajar podrian ellas.
Asi, ellas podrian trabajar juntas.
Al llegar vi el edificio alto siempre habia visto en su sitio web.
agregar "que" antes de "siempre"
Spot the 4 mistakes:
Ms. Moran began her teaching career in kindergarten. But just 4 year’s later, she was moved to 4th grade. This grade level becomed her favorite! She learned that change is not always bad, but now she gets excited when facing new challenges. She decided to talk about her journey in her Youtube channel called that venezuelan teacher.
year's - years
becomed - became
but - so
that venezuelan teacher - That Venezuelan Teacher
Correct the mistake:
My favorite movie is harry potter 7.
harry potter -> Harry Potter
Cual oracion deberia ser eliminada?
1 A los pocos dias, las amigas se juntaron para recaudar fondos. 2 Recogieron tanto que debieron buscar una caja mas grande para las cosas donadas. 3 Finalmente llenaron tres cajas grandes. 4 Usaron cinta para cerrarlas muy bien. 5 La aseguraron con cinta para cerrarla. 6 Le colocaron una descripcion en la parte de arriba y las llevaron al centro de recoleccion.
Elimina la 5
Mi tipo de mascota favorita son los reptiles porque son independientes callados y lindos de ver.
agrega una coma despues de "independientes"
Remove the unnecessary sentence:
1 Tom and I were buddies who hung out at the local park every day after school. 2 He was a senior, and I was a junior. 3 Despite the grade difference, Tom treated me like a close friend, always ready to chat and share advice. 4 Most people knew me by my regular name, but Tom gave me the nickname Joey, which stuck since we met in our freshman year. 5 Our habit of meeting at the park started way back, and it became something we both looked forward to. 6 We were always excited to meet at the park.
Sentence 6
Chocolate chip cookies are great because they are really easier to make.
easier -> easy
Corrige esta oracion:
El nombre de la fundacion es hogar san rafael.
El nombre de la fundacion es Hogar San Rafael.
o
El nombre de la fundacion es "Hogar San Rafael".
Hay estudios que muestran que la gente que hace buenas obras es muy feliz que la gente que no las hace.
cambiar "muy" por "mas"