Capitalization
The joey stays in the pouch to drink its mother's milk, but it also starts to learn about the outside World.
Joey, world
The Joey still pooks its head back in when it wants milk, but their isn't much room anymore.
pokes
As soon as a joey is born, it climbs into its mother's pouch?
As soon as a joey is born, it climbs into its mother's pouch.
During this time the joey's eyes open. During this time it grows hair.
During this time the joey's eyes open, and it grows hair.
In the pouch the joey finds the ends of special tubes these tubes contain milk.
In the pouch the joey finds the ends of special tubes. These tubes contain milk.
"Churk-churk-churk!" i cry in a high-pitched tone.
I
The predator is to big to fit in the burrows.
too
What does he hear.
?
The prairie dog's stomach feels empty. It goes off in search of roots and insects.
The prairie dog's stomach feels empty, so it goes off in search of roots and insects.
Slowly it peeks out from the mound it is searching for signs of a hawk.
Slowly it peeks out from the mound, and it is searching for signs of a hawk.
Tales of a Fourth grade Nothing is a book about a fourth grader named Peter Hatcher.
Grade
Peter fels that he gets blammed for the mischief Fudge creates.
feels, blamed
Peter is still upset so his father decides to buy him a new pet.
Peter is still upset, so his father decides to buy him a new pet.
I liked Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing. It was about an ordinary kid like me.
I liked Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing because it was about an ordinary kid like me.
The things that happened to Peter and his brother were so funny they made me realize my brother is pretty funny, too.
The things that happened to Peter and his brother were so funny. They made me realize my brother is pretty funny, too.
A Hedgehog is a small mammal.
No change
Peting a hedgehog might fell a little like petting a hairbrush.
Petting, feel
A hedgehog has quills all over its face legs, and belly.
A hedgehog has quills all over its face and belly.
A hedgehog looks like a porcupine. The two animals aren't related.
A hedgehog looks like a porcupine, but the two animals aren't related.
A hedgehog rolls up into a ball when it goes to sleep this protects the softest parts of its body.
A hedgehog rolls up into a ball when it goes to sleep, and this protects the softest parts of its body.
everyday we went with Mom to look for fossils.
Everyday, mom
In the dessert it was hot during the day and freezing at night.
desert
"This is some vacation" I complained on the first day
"This is some vacation", I complained on the first day.
My mother is a scientist. She teaches at a university. She studies fossils.
My mother is a scientist. She studies and teaches about fossils at an university.
Wind blew the sand everywhere even our food had sand on it!
make no change