Now or Never
Claire wants to stengthen the focus of her story. Which of the following is the BEST way to replace sentence 10?
Today was Jared's last chance to overcome his fear and give raplelling a try.
How does sentence 4 need to be changed?
Change then to than
What change should be made in sentence 4?
Change great-grandmothers to great-grandmother's
#18 What change needs to be made in sentence 35?
Change themselfs to themselves
# 1 is revising or editing?
Revising
The meaning of sentence 12 is unclear. What change can Claire make to improve the clarity of the sentence?
Change He to Another counselor
What change needs to be made in sentence 10?
Change climmed to climbed
What change, if any, should be made to sentence 10?
Insert quotation marks at the beginning of the sentence
#12 What change should be made in sentence 29?
Change Ive to I've
Question 3 is revising of what type?
Adding a supporting detail
Which of these sentences can BEST follow to support sentence 15?
Andrea was right there, connected to the rope that Jared was connected to at the bottom of the cliff.
What is the correct way to write sentence 13?
For the fourth-grade class hike, a lot of kids wore sturdy, new hiking shoes.
What is the correct way to write sentences 17 and 18?
All the attention prompted Blare to create an organization called Blaire's Bears for Haiti.
#5
Claire forgot to include an important detail in the last paragraph (sentences 16-29)
With trembling legs he took his first step
Reread the paragraph carefully. Where do we insert?
After sentence 20
Question # 5 is asking you to help the reader make this part of the paper solid
Conclusion
What is the most effective way to combine sentence 24 adn 25?
As he made his way steadily down, a grin began to spread over his face.
What change, if any shoud be made to sentence 21?
Change Event to event
What change needs to be made in sentence 22?
Change your to you're
Now or Never is mainly about
A boy overcoming his fear
Answer choice C is incorrect because
too means "also" or "extreme"
Claire's paper ends abruptly and leaves the reader wondering what happens next. Which sentence should Clair add to the end of the paper?
"Can I do it again?" he shouted with excitement.
How does sentence 23 need to be changed?
Change it to they
What change should be made in sentence 30?
Change sended to sent
My Prized Possession is mainly about
A boy's favorite tennis shoes and why they are his prized possesion
Question 12 is incorrect because?
The word I've doesn't include an apostophe