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Last summer, my family visited Aunt Hilda in alaska.
What is Alaska? Alaska is the name of a state, capitalize it!
The correction that should be made to this sentence. The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
What is was should be were?
... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
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Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
What is a comma afer forests?
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
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It did not take her long to turn casual swiming into a competitive profession.
What is change swiming to swimming?
swiming is spelled - swimming
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Man first landed on the moon on July 29 1969.
What is add a comma after 29?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
What is American? American is a nationality, capitalize it!
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She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
What is capitalize Winter and Olympics?
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
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I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.
What is quotation marks around the words that Sam says "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. My mom desided to call some local beekeepers.
What is desided is spelled incorrectly - decided?
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He even pours chocolate syrup on his mashed potatos.
What is change potatos to potatoes?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
What is spiders should be written....spider's showing possession?
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Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.
What is change waist to waste?
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How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
What is change the period to a question mark?
This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. He took all the bees away in two boxs.
What is boxs should be written boxes?
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Jane disaproved of the idea that she couldn't do what any man could do.
What is change disaproved to disapproved?
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On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.
What is Saturday should be capitalized? OR What is a comma after Saturday?
Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized! Also, there needs to be a comma after Saturday
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Spider silk is stronger than steal wire.
What is change steal to steel?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. Tyler did most of the hard work by getting the ground ready, but Guy helped sew our seeds.
What is change sew to sow?
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She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.
What is Olympics should be capitalized?
Olympics is a historical event - capitalize it!
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As there friendship grew, they became inseparable.
What is change there to their?
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Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.
What is a comma after watermelons?
Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.
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I woked up and did not remember where I was.
What is change woked to woke?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.
What is change fearfull to fearful?
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There was to much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.
What is the first to is used incorrectly, it should be spelled too?
The correction that should be made to this sentence. "The nurse will check your eyes today" announced Mrs. Loeung.
What is insert a comma after today?