Revising & Editing Game

Editing 1

100

What correction should be made to this sentence? Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.

Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!

200

What correction should be made to this sentence? Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.

American is a nationality-capitalize it!

300

What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.

spiders should be written....spider's showing possession.

400

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.

Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized! Also, there needs to be a comma after Saturday

500

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.

Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.

Editing 2

100

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.

Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.

200

What correction should be made in this sentence? She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.

Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!

300

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.

Change waist to waste.

400

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Spider silk is stronger than steal wire.

Change steal to steel.

500

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? I woked up and did not remember where I was.

Change woked to woke.

Editing 3

100

What correction should be made to this sentence? Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.

Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.

200

What change should be made? I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.

You need quotation marks around the words that Sam says! "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother.

300

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!

This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?

400

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Tyre did most of the hard work by getting the ground ready, but Guy helped sew our seeds.

Change sew to sow.

500

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.

Change fearfull to fearful.

Editing 4

100

What correction should be made to this sentence? It did not take her long to turn casual swiming into a competitive profession.

swiming is spelled - swimming

200

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? My mom desided to call some local beekeepers.

desided is spelled incorrectly - decided

300

What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? He took all the bees away in two boxs.

boxs should be written boxes.

400

What correction should be made to this sentence? She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.

Olympics is a historical event - capitalize it!

500

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? There was to much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.

The first to is used incorrectly, it should be spelled too.

Editing 5

100

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Man first landed on the moon on July 29 1969.

Add a comma after 29.

200

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? He even pours chocolate syrup on his mashed potatos.

change potatos to potatoes..

300

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Jane disaproved of the idea that she couldn't do what any man could do.

Change disaproved to disapproved.

400

What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? As there friendship grew, they became inseparable.

Change there to their.

500

What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? "The nurse will check your eyes today" announced Mrs. Loeung.

Insert a comma after today.