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What correction should be made to this sentence? Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!
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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
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What correction should be made to this sentence? Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
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Combine the sentences:

Mrs. Smith teaches Reading. Mrs. Labroo teaches Reading.

Mrs. Smith and Ms. Labroo teach reading.

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Combine these two sentences into one: "I went to the park. I played soccer with my friends."

"I went to the park and played soccer with my friends."

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What correction should be made to this sentence? kobe bryant was a well known american basketball player.

American is a nationality-capitalize it!

Kobe Bryant- Names need to be capitalized.

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What correction should be made in this sentence? She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
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What change should be made? I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.
You need quotation marks around the words that Sam says! "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother.
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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? Mrs. Pang she loves to write!

Remove she

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This sentence needs revision for conciseness: "I am going to be going to the store later today because I need to buy some groceries."

"I’m going to the store later to buy groceries."

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What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
spiders should be written....spider's showing possession.
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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Travis Tran is known for finding ways to waist time in class.

Change waist to waste.

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?
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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? One time, Jamie ran a marathon once. 

Remove the repeated phrase once

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This sentence has unnecessary words: "We are going to the movie theater to see the new movie film."

"We are going to the movie theater to see the new film."

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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.
Saturday is the name of a day of week. It should be capitalized!
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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? The babys were crying!

Change babys to babies

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Sabrina eats sushi yesterday.

Change eats to ate

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What sentence doesn't belong:

I love to go to the movies. You can get popcorn to munch on while you watch. Sushi is my favorite food. You can also sit in a comfy recliner. The screen is huge. 

Remove the sentence Sushi is my favorite food.

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Combine these two sentences: "I love pizza. My brother prefers burgers."

"I love pizza, but my brother prefers burgers."

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.

Maya needs to be capitalized

Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? i woked up and did not remember where i was.

Change woked to woke.

I is always capitalized

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? sarah sounded fearfull, but john wasn't.

Change fearfull to fearful.

Capitalize Sarah and John

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This sentence has unnecessary words: "I like play games and I like to read books in my free time."

"I like to play games and read books in my free time"?

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Combine these sentences: i wake up late. i was late to school 

I woke up late, so I was late to school