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What correction should be made to this sentence? Gertrude Ederle was a great american swimmer.
American is a nationality-capitalize it!
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What correction should be made in this sentence? She had watched skiers perform during the 2010 winter olympics at Whistler Mountain.
Change 2010 winter olympics to 2010 Winter Olympics...It's a name of an event, so capitalize it!
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What change should be made? I like to read stories aloud, Sam said to his mother.

You need quotation marks around the words that Sam says! "I like to read stories aloud," Sam said to his mother.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? There was to much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.

There was too much noise in the room for the baby to sleep.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence?
Nick is very silly Ian makes faces even pours chocolate syrup on his mashed potatos.

Nick is very silly, and Ian makes faces and even pours chocolate syrup on his mashed potatoes.

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What change, if any, should be made to this sentence? The silk shoots out through tiny tubes in the spiders body.
spiders should be written....spider's showing possession.
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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? I woked up and did not remember where I was.

I woke up and did not remember where I was.

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees!
This is a question! How would you get rid of a huge colony of bees?
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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? He took all the bees away in two boxs.

He took all the bees away in two boxes.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Jeremy threw the ball across the room, Hailey acted like she did not know what happened.

Jeremy threw the ball across the room, but Hailey acted like she did not know what happened.

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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? On saturday the beekeepers came to our house.

On Saturday the beekeepers came to our house.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Spider silk is stronger than steal wire.

Spider silk is stronger than steel wire.

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Tyre did most of the hard work by getting the ground ready, but Guy helped sew our seeds.
Change sew to sow.
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What correction should be made to this sentence? She went to the 1924 olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.

She went to the 1924 Olympics and won a gold medal as part of the U.S. swim team.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Michael Brown was late to class again, Arielle tried to help him get there on time.

Michael Brown was late to class again, but Arielle tried to help him get there on time.

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What correction should be made to this sentence? Last summer my family went to visit Aunt Hilda in alaska.
Alaska is the name of a state-capitalize it!
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What change, if any, should be made in this sentence? The beekeepers was happy to have all our bees.
Should be... The beekeepers were happy to have all our bees.
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What correction should be made to this sentence? Alaska is rich in forests wildlife, and minerals.
Comma in a series! Alaska is rich in forests, wildlife, and minerals.
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What correction should be made to this sentence? It did not take her long to turn casual swiming into a competitive profession.

swiming is spelled - swimming

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Katie eats snacks, but Moises always tries to steal them.

Katie eats snacks, but Moises always tries to steal them.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Maya picked peppers watermelons and lettuce to plant in the garden.

Comma in a series...Maya picked peppers, watermelons, and lettuce to plant in the garden.

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? "The nurse will check your eyes today" announced Mrs. Loeung.

"The nurse will check your eyes today," announced Mrs. Loeung.

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What change, if any, should be made in the sentence? Mrs.Worling sounded fearfull, but Talon wasn't.

Mrs. Worling sounded fearful, but Talon wasn't.


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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? As there friendship grew, they became inseparable.

As their friendship grew, they became inseparable.

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What change, if any, should be made to the following sentence? Alazay and Julius worked together on the project they finished it before anyone else.

Alazay and Julius worked together on the project, and they finished it before anyone else.