Revising
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Madison cleaned the living room. Audrey cleaned the kitchen.
A. Madison cleaned the living too and Audrey cleaning the kitchen.
B. Madison cleaned the living room, and Audrey cleaned the kitchen.
C. Madison cleaned the living room and Audrey cleaned the kitchen.
D. No revision needed.
B. Madison cleaned the living room, and Audrey cleaned the kitchen.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
"Snake! yelled Samantha," pointing at the long slippery snake coming towards her.
A. Delete the comma after long
B. Delete the quotation marks after Samantha and add quotation marks after the exclamation point.
C. Change the period to an exclamation point.
D. Make no change
B. Delete the quotation marks after Samantha and add quotation marks after the exclamation point.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Anthony could see for hisself that the water was overflowing the sink.
A. Change see to sea
B. Add a comma after that
C. Change hisself to himself
D. Make no change
C. Change hisself to himself
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Our class is amazing, and our class will pass our test.
A. Our class is amazing but will pass our test.
B. Our class is amazing, and will pass our test.
C. Our class is amazing, so will pass the test.
D. Our class is amazing and will pass the test.
D. Our class is amazing and will pass the test.
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Ella suggested we go to the library. An stop at the store along the way.
A. Ella suggested we go to the library, we stopped at the store along the way.
B. Ella suggested we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
C. Ella suggesting we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
D. Correct as written.
B. Ella suggested we go to the library and stop at the store along the way.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
"Where are you going." asked Will.
A. Change the period to a question mark
B. Change are to is
C. Delete the quotations
D. No change is needed
A. Change the period to a question mark
What change should be made to the sentence?
Mrs. Carney always has several Beany Babies hiding in the closet for her children to play with.
A. Change Babies to Babies
B. Add a period to the end of the sentence
C. Change closet to closset
D. Delete the period after Mrs
B. Add a period to the end of the sentence
What is the correct way to revise the two sentences?
Almost eight gallons of water were lost. Every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
A. Almost eight gallons every day of water were lost from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
B. Almost eight gallons of water were lost every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
C. From Mr. Steele's leaky faucet almost eight gallons every day of water were lost.
D. The sentences are correct.
B. Almost eight gallons of water were lost every day from Mr. Steele's leaky faucet.
What is the correct way to write the two sentences?
Harmful chemicals run off in the fields. Can weaken the eggs of falcons.
A. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields can weaken the eggs of falcons.
B. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields and can weaken the eggs or falcons.
C. Harmful chemicals weaken the eggs of falcons and can run off in the fields.
D. The two sentences are correct.
A. Harmful chemicals run off in the fields can weaken the eggs of falcons.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
The scientist had been studying the Plant for a very long time.
A. Change been to a
B. Change Plant to plant
C. Change scientist to Scientist
D. No change is needed
B. Change Plant to plant
What change should be made to the sentence?
When I looked ahead, I could sea one trail, but beyond that were several more trails to follow.
A. Change to to two
B. Change one to won
C. Change trail to trale
D. Change sea to see
D. Change sea to see
What is the correct way to revise the two sentences?
Jeremy had basketball practice. Jeremy also having homework.
A. Jeremy has basketball practice, but he also had homework.
B. Jeremy had basketball practice, Jeremy also had homework to do.
C. Jeremy had basketball practice, because Jeremy also had homework to do.
D. The two sentences are correct.
A. Jeremy has basketball practice, but he also had homework.
What is the correct way to revise the sentence?
If people would pick up trash after they use the park, it would always be clean.
A. The park would always be clean, if less trash was picked up by people.
B. Picking up trash by many people using the park would always be clean.
C. The park would always be clean by people picked up trash after they use the park.
D. The sentence is correct.
D. The sentence is correct.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Those is my favorite song.
A. Change those to that
B. Change is to are
C. Change song to songs
D. No change is needed
A. Change those to that
What change should be made to the sentence?
When my cousins visited, they left there game at our house.B. Change there to their
What is the BEST way to combine the two sentences?
School is almost over. I can't wait for summer.
A. School is almost over, and I can't wait for summer.
B. School is almost over, but I can't wait for summer.
C. School is almost over and I can't wait for summer.D. The two sentences are correct.
A. School is almost over, and I can't wait for summer.
What is the BEST way to combine the two sentences?
It became too wet to play football. It was raining outside.
A. It became too wet to play football because it was raining outside.
B. It became too wet to play football, because it was raining outside.
C. It became wet outside because it was too rainy and playing football.
D. The two sentences are correct.
B. It became too wet to play football, because it was raining outside.
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Sawyers party will be at a cool park with a jungle gym and a huge play structure.
A. Change party to parties
B. Change park to Park
C. Change Sawyers to Sawyer's
D. No change is needed
C. Change Sawyers to Sawyer's
What change, if any, should be made to the sentence?
Joshua's mom said he cannot go outside to play because its too cold.
A. Change its to it's
B. Change mom to Mom
C. Change too to to
D. No change is needed
A. Change its to it's
What is the best way to revise this sentence?
The Statue of Liberty, given to America, was a birthday gift.
A. The Statue of Liberty was given to America as a birthday gift.
B. The Statue of Liberty was given to America, and was given as a birthday gift.
C. The Statue of Liberty was a birthday gift, given to America.
D. No revision is needed.
A. The Statue of Liberty was given to America as a birthday gift.