Revision

Rules

100

Rule 1

I'm a student I must Obey

200

Rule 2

I'm above the rules HAHAHA

300

What do you do?

Whatever works

400

When do you break a rule

When it gets you the result you want

500

Why is a rule a crowbar

It can get you out of a jam but it can also ruin things

Tools

100

How long is a thesis

One sentence

200

Who are tools for

you, not the customer

300

What are diagnostic tools

Tools that find the problem for us like a CAT scan

400

What are the 5 things that one revises

Theis, Purpose, Audience, Tone, and Style

500

What are the 4 steps

1- Troubleshoot 2- Organization 3- Peer feedback 4- Edit for grammar and mechanics

Random

100

What is the title of chapter 8

The Spirit Of Revising

200

What is one example of rewriting

experimentation, adventure, boldly going where no first draft has gone before

300

What two magazines are mentioned in the Audience section

Car and Driver, Bass Fishing Monthly

400

Using a tool takes ____

Skill - pg 133 #3

500

The Supreme Court refused to hear what case in 1984

A revise discrimination case against the city of San Francisco - pg 138 Half-sized version

Length

100

How do you make an essay shorter

take out words that aren't needed

200

How do you make an essay longer

By filling it in with words

300

What does expanding the canvas mean

To write about the larger issue like why I got an A rather than I got an A

400

What do you call an essay you shortened into a sentence

The head of a pin

500

What is the ultimate way to lengthen your essay

Select white text and toss your computer down the stairs