Revision Basics
Bones, Muscles, or Skin?
Level 1 Strategies
Level 2 Strategies
Level 3 and Editing
Revision Wisdom
100

This term means "re-seeing" your ideas and improving what you want to say.

What is revision

100

Fixing spelling and punctuation errors happens at this level.

What is Level 3: Skin

100

At Level 1, you should ask yourself if you still do this with what you wrote.

What is agree

100

At Level 2, you should replace general words with these.

What are specific examples

100

Level 3 focuses on fixing these three types of errors.

What are grammar, spelling, and punctuation

100

You should give yourself this between drafts to see your writing with fresh eyes.  

What is time

200

Professional writers spend most of their time doing this, not editing.

What is revising

200

Changing your main ideas and what your writing says happens at this level.  

What is Level 1: Bones

200

This Level 1 strategy involves explaining your main idea out loud to a classmate.

What is sharing your draft

200
You can do what with vague words in your draft

What is change to something more specific 

200

This is another name for Level 3 work.  

What is editing

200

At Level 2, you ask yourself if this person will understand what you mean.

Who is your reader

300

This is what your first draft should be considered, not your final product.

What is a starting point

300

Making your writing clearer and organizing paragraphs happens at this level.  

What is Level 2: Muscles

300

After taking a break, you should come back and do this about your topic.  

What is freewrite or rambling thought


300

You should add these three things where ideas are unclear.

What are examples, definitions, or evidence


300

You should read your paper this way to catch errors at Level 3.

What is backwards, sentence by sentence

300

At Level 2, you should do this with paragraphs so ideas flow in a logical order.

What is rearrange them

400

Revision helps you discover this about your writing.

What is what you really want to say

400

This is the level most students jump to first, but shouldn't.  

What is Level 3: Skin

400

You should find this type of sentence and ask why it matters

What is your most interesting sentence

400

At Level 2, you should do this with sentences that confuse or distract from your point.  

What is delete them

400

This is when Level 3 editing should happen in the revision process

What is last (or after revising bones and muscles)

400

This is what Level 2 focuses on: how clearly and effectively you do this.

What is communicate your ideas

500

This is the step where good writing becomes great writing.  

What is revision


500

You should always revise in this order.

What is Bones first, then Muscles, then Skin

500

At Level 1, you need to be willing to do this with parts that don't work anymore.

What is throw them out (or delete them)

500

You should check that each paragraph connects to this.

What is your main argument

500

This is why you shouldn't fix grammar at the beginning of revision.  

What is you might delete that paragraph

500

At Level 2, you should look for this type of language that needs specific examples.  

What is vague or abstract language