Pathos
I first learned how to walk when i was 9 months old. I then entered my first race at age 10 and won. I later joined the track team in 9th grade and won many races. I am now racing in the olympics for america
Story Telling
John Smith, An environmental scientist, claims that we are destroying our environment.
Expertise
The Earth's surface temperature has risen significantly since the late 19th century, with the 10 warmest years on record all occurring since 2010. The rate of warming has more than doubled in the last 40 years compared to the period from 1850 to 1980.
Facts
Present perfect: Peter really (throw) himself into his internship this summer; he's asked for more responsibilities and has even been invited to attend a conference with his manager.
has thrown
Imagine the poor baby cows watching their mother get slaughtered!
Pathos
"The skies are gray and smoggy, the air is polluted and hard to breath, the world is sad and wrecked. This is what we could see soon if we dont stop global warming."
Imagery
Morals
Statistics
past perfect: The mayoral candidate believed that he (sweep) a shady business deal under the rug—until a local reporter released an exposé only two weeks before the election.
had swept
studies show that almost 85% of highschoolers graduate highschool.
Logos
____ are strong. ___ are hardworking good people. We are the ____ and we keep the world running. (example: americans, athletes, veterans or a group of something ect.)
Appeal to _____
"I studied at the university of Harvard for 8 years and i can say with some certainty, the Chicago bears are going to win the superbowl."
education
"Historically, raising the legal age of smoking cigarettes has suppressed addiction rates significantly. This proves why we must take more action to stop minors from vaping.
past perfect: Production for Francis Ford Coppola's famous film Apocalypse Now was temporarily suspended after a typhoon stranded the crew and destroyed several sets they (build).
had built
"We must defend our country and stand up for America!"
Pathos
"MF doom's music is so terrible it makes my eardrums bleed!"
Hyperbole
" even though teachers believe that highschool students would focus on their phones during class rather than school if given the choice, I believe that cellphones should be allowed in classrooms once we are in highschool because by that age students should be mature enough to know when to use them and when not to.
Concession
"We checked the heart rate of 100 people watching Caillou and the heart rate of 100 people watching the human centipede. The people watching human centipede had a higher average heart rate proving that the human centipede is scarier than Caillou
Research
future perfect: By the time his paper is published, Jeffrey (begin) his final year at Brookfield College, where he's studying environmental engineering.
will have begun
as philosepher and economist John Stuart Mill argued with regards to individualism, having individual freedom is crucial to developing a successful society
Ethos
I have a dream today. I have a dream that one day every valley shall be engulfed, every hill shall be exalted and every mountain shall be made low, the rough places will be made plains and the crooked places will be made straight and the glory of the Lord shall be revealed and all flesh shall see it together.
Anaphora.. Not repetition!
P.S. did i trick you hahahahaha
Nike shoes are the best for basketball preformance. They are so good that even Lakers foward Lebron James says they are the best.
Endorsements
"Most vegetables are green. For example, broccoli, celery, brussel sprouts, and greenbeans."
Enumeration
present perfect: Contrary to popular belief, a honeybee does not always die after it (sting) something; for example, honeybees can usually sting other insects without hurting themselves.
has stung
Apple reveals the new Iphone that can download apps with speeds of up to 200mb/s
Logos