Fragments/Subject& Predicate
Comma Splice
Conjunctions &Revising run ons
run-ons
Run-Ons again
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What is a fragment?

A fragment a sentence that is missing a subject, a verb, or is not a complete thought

100

This sentence is not fixed. Tell why it is not, and then correct it: The students completed their classwork, they wanted to go out and play.

The students completed their classwork. They wanted to go out and play.


The students completed their class because they wanted to go out and play.



100

Name one conjunction!

F A N B O Y S

For, And, Nor, But, Or, Yet, So.

 FANBOYS

100

The team packed the equipment, labeled each case, checked the inventory, they drove to the field site but the forecast predicted rain.

The team packed the equipment, labeled each case, and checked the inventory, and they drove to the field site, but the forecast predicted rain.

100

Fix this sentence: Our winter break is almost here I am going to go sledding.

Our winter break is almost here. I am going to go sledding!
200

Outside the concert hall, I noticed several teenagers waiting for the elevator on the third floor looking tired.


identify the subject and the predicate 

Sub: I

Predicate: noticed several ....

200

Correct this comma splice: Heavy rain fell throughout the night, by morning every major road was flooded.

Heavy rain fell throughout the night, and by morning every major road was flooded

200

Use a conjunction to fix this sentence: Jacob ate food, he was very full

Jacob ate food, so he was very full. 

200
Fix this sentence: I did the homework Dave did not.
I did the homework, but Dave did not.
200

Fix this sentence: The cat was running to the mailbox I had to catch the cat.

The cat was running to the mailbox, so I had to catch the cat.

300

Is complete, fragment or run on? 

We did not resume practice after the rain stopped.

complete

300

Correct this comma splice: Mary kissed Frank, she hugged him

Mary kissed Frank, and she hugged him.

300
Fix this sentence with a conjunction: Bob said he would help me with math homework, he didn't.
Bob said he would help me with math homework, but he didn't.
300
Fix this sentence: People love peace they hate war.
People love peace, and they hate war.
300
Fix this run-on: Murray takes the train to school Mom rides the bus.
Murray takes the train to school, and Mom rides the bus.
400

who is the subject in this sentence? 

In the science lab, the students observed the kitten playing with the yarn while recording data.

the students 

400
Fix this sentence: John studied hard for the test, he failed it anyway.
John studied hard for the test, but he failed it anyway.
400
Fix this sentence with a conjunction: I answered the question, Frank did not.
I answered the question, but Frank did not.
400

Fix: The debate ran late into the evening the audience stayed until the end many students stayed after to ask questions.

The debate ran late into the evening, and the audience stayed until the end. Many students remained afterward to ask questions.

 or (another , + fanboy) after end.

400
Fix this sentence: Carmen loved traveling in Italy she felt Rome was too hot.
Carmen loved traveling in Italy, but she felt Rome was too hot.
500

Fix this sentence: fell from the sky

Frogs fell from the sky

500

What is a comma splice?

A comma splice is where a comma is used incorrectly in a run-on. Example: The sun is high, put on some sunblock. This is a comma splice ^^^ you need a conjunction to fix it!

500

The mural took weeks to complete volunteers painted long into the night the neighborhood hosted a celebration for the unveiling.

The mural took weeks to complete, and volunteers painted long into the night afterwards, so the neighborhood hosted a celebration for the unveiling.

or (add periods where the commas+fanboys are)

500
Fix this sentence: Dennis composes music many people enjoy his melodies.
Dennis composes music, and many people enjoy his melodies.
500
Fix this sentence: Americans shake hands when they meet the Japanese bow.
Americans shake hands when they meet, but the Japanese bow.