Identifying Sentence Errors
Improving Sentences
Reading Passage 2
Reading Passage 1
Just For Fun
100
Since 1 there is two pencils, a pad of paper, and a ruler on each desk, students 2 do not have to bring 3 their own supplies. 4 No error
What is #1? (There are two pencils, a pad of paper and a ruler...)
100
Looking up from the base of the mountain, the trail seemed more treacherous than it really was.

1. Looking up

2. While Looking Up

3. By looking up

4. Viewed

What is 4 (Modifier error -- What was "looking up"?)
100
As used in line 21, “allows” most nearly means

1 admits.

2 tolerates.

3 grants.

4 enables.

What is choice 4?

The second paragraph states that “TESS allows scientists to order up Internet-based surveys.” In the context of the service that the TESS program provides to scientists, “allows” most nearly means enables.

Choices 1, 2, and 3 are incorrect because in the context of the passage’s discussion of TESS, “allows” most nearly means enables, not admits (choice 1), tolerates (choice 2), or grants (choice 3).

100
Over the course of the passage, the main focus shifts from a

1. general discussion of the narrator’s love of reading to a portrayal of an influential incident.

2. depiction of the narrator’s father to an examination of an author with whom the narrator becomes enchanted.

3. symbolic representation of a skill the narrator possesses to an example of its application.

4. tale about the hardships of the narrator’s childhood to an analysis of the effects of those hardships.

What is choice 1?

The first paragraph explains the narrator’s love of reading: “Even then my only friends were made of paper and ink. . . . Where my school friends saw notches of ink on incomprehensible pages, I saw light, streets, and people.” The fourth paragraph reiterates this love in its description of the bookshop as a “sanctuary” and “refuge.” The shift in focus occurs in the last six paragraphs, which recount the gift of a book that transforms the narrator’s love of reading into a desire to write: “I did not think there could be a better [book] in the whole world and I was beginning to suspect that Mr. Dickens had written it just for me. Soon I was convinced that I didn’t want to do anything else in life but learn to do what Mr. Dickens had done.” Thus the passage’s overall focus shifts from the narrator’s love of reading to a specific incident that influences his decision to become a writer.

100
How long does it take for a plastic bag to decompose?

1. About 100 years

2. About 500 years

3. About 1,000 years

4. About 10,000 years

What is 3 - 1,000 years?

(To put this in perspective -- If the Normans had used plastic bags when they invaded England in 1066, Archeologists would still be unearthing their plastic bags today.)

200
Air pollution caused by industrial fumes 1 has been studied for years, 2but only recently 3 has the harmful effects of noise pollution become known. 4 No error.
#3 agreement (Correction: have)
200
1. Barbara cannot help but think that she will win a college scholarship.

2. Barbara cannot help but to think she will win a college scholarship.

3. Barbara cannot help not to think that she will win a college scholarship.

4. Barbara cannot but help thinking that she will win a college scholarship.

What is 1? (Verb usage)
200
As used in line 43, “strength” most nearly means

1) attribution.

2) exertion.

3) toughness.

4) significance.

What is 4 - significance? The fifth paragraph of the passage addresses the “statistical strength” of certain scientific findings. In this context, “strength” most nearly means significance, or importance. Choices 1, 2, and 3 are incorrect because in the context of the statistical importance of scientific findings, “strength” most nearly means significance, not attribution (choice 1), exertion (choice 2), or toughness (choice 3).
200
With which of the following statements about his father would the narrator most likely agree?

1) He lacked affection for the narrator.

2) He disliked any unnecessary use of money.

3) He would not have approved of Sempere’s gift.

4) He objected to the writings of Charles Dickens

What is choice 3?

The tenth paragraph shows that upon returning home, the narrator hides the gift (the “new friend”) that Sempere had given him: “That afternoon I took my new friend home, hidden under my clothes so that my father wouldn’t see it.” It can be inferred from this sentence that the narrator’s concern arises from an awareness that his father would disapprove of the gift.

200
This is Ms. Dives' all-time favorite musician/singer.

1. Eminem

2. Elvis Presley

3. Bruce Springsteen

4. Pitbull

What is 3 - Bruce Springsteen?
300
1 Even before he became the youngest player to win the Wimbledon men's 2 singles championship, Boris Becker 3 had sensed that his life would no longer be the same. 4 No error.
What is #4, No error?
300
All the demands on soprano Kathleen Battle for operatic performances, solo concerts, and special guest appearances, tempting her to sing too often and straining her voice.

1. appearances, tempting her to sing too often and straining

2. appearances not only tempt her to sing too often plus they strain

3. appearances tempts her not only into singing too often but then she strains

4. appearances tempt her to sing too often and strain

What is 4?
300
The passage indicates that a problem with failing to document null results is that

1) the results of related studies will be misleading.

2) researchers may overlook promising areas of study.

3) mistakes in the collection of null results may be overlooked.

4) the bias against null results will be disregarded.

What is choice 1 Choice 1 is the best answer. The seventh paragraph discusses the negative consequences of not publishing null results, emphasizing that “worse, if researchers publish significant results from similar experiments in the future, they could look stronger than they should because the earlier null studies are ignored.” In other words, failing to document null results means that the results of later, related studies will not be as accurate as they appear.

Choices 2, 3, and 4 are incorrect because the passage does not indicate that failing to document null results can cause promising areas of research to be overlooked (choice 2), cause errors in data collection practices that lead to null results being overlooked (choice 3), or lessen bias against null results (choice 4).

300
It can reasonably be inferred from the passage that the main reason that the narrator considers Great Expectations to be the best gift he ever received is because

1) reading the book convinced him that he wanted to be a writer.

2) he’d only ever been given sweets and snacks as gifts in the past.

3) the gift meant that Sempere held him in high regard.

4) Sempere was a friend of the book’s author.

What is choice 1?

The last paragraph makes clear the narrator’s enthusiasm for Charles Dickens’s Great Expectations, and it can be inferred from the last sentence of this paragraph that this enthusiasm motivated the narrator to aspire to a career as a writer: “Soon I was convinced that I didn’t want to do anything else in life but learn to do what Mr. Dickens had done.”

300
The Soviet Union launched the world's first satellite in 1957. It's name was:

1. FLV-57

2. Sputnik

3. Apollo 13

4. It did not have a name.

What is #2 Sputnik?
400
The dean 1 of the college, together with some other faculty members, 2 are planning a conference for the purpose of 3 laying down certain regulations. 4No error.
What is 2? Subject-verb agreement -- The subject is "the dean", singular. "The dean is..."
400
The revolt against Victorianism was perhaps even more marked in poetry than either fiction or drama.

1. either fiction or drama

2. in either fiction or drama

3. either fiction or in drama

4. either in fiction or drama

What is 2 (missing preposition, parallel structure)
400
Which of the following statements is supported by the graph?

1) Studies with mixed results were just as likely to be published as they were to be left either unpublished or unwritten.

2) Studies with mixed results occurred more frequently than did studies with strong and null results combined.

3) Studies with mixed results were more likely to be published in top journals than they were to be published in non-top journals.

4) Studies with mixed results were the most common type of social science studies.

What is choice 1?

The middle bar of the graph pertains to social science studies that produced mixed results. The top 50 percent of this bar represents studies that were published. The bottom 50 percent of this bar represents studies that were either unpublished or went unwritten. Since each of the two categories accounts for 50 percent of the total, it can be said that studies with mixed results were just as likely to be published as they were to be left either unpublished or unwritten.

400
As used in line 44, “weight” most nearly means

1) bulk.

2) burden.

3) force.

4) clout.

What is choice 2 - burden?

In the fourth paragraph, the narrator describes his reluctance to leave Sempere’s bookshop: “When it was time for me to leave, I would do so dragging my feet, a weight on my soul.” In this context, “weight” most nearly means burden.

400
US HISTORY - Only 4 men have been both VP & President & served in both houses of Congress; 2 of them shared this last name.

1. Johnson

2. Tyler

3. Nixon

4. Washington

What is #1 Johnson?

Andrew Johnson served in the House from 1843 to 1853, in the Senate from 1857 to 1862 (and again briefly in 1875), as Vice-President for just over a month in 1865, after which acceded to the Presidency after Lincoln’s assassination.

Lyndon Johnson served in the House from 1937 to 1949, in the Senate from 1949 to 1961, as Vice-President from 1961 to 1963, and as President from 1963 to 1969.

500
By virtue of 1its size and super-sensitive electronics, modern radio telescopes are able to gather more waves and 2 discriminate among them with greater precision 3than earlier versions could. 4 No error
#1 (Modern radio telescopes needs a plural pronoun)
500
1. He never has kept and he never will keep his word.

2. He never has and he never will keep his word.

3. He has never yet and never will keep his word.

4.He has not ever and he will not keep his word.

What is 1? Cannot repeat kept because you use a different verb form --> Will keep
500
According to the graph, social science studies yielding strong results were

1) unwritten over 50 percent of the time.

2) unpublished but written 50 percent of the time.

3) published in a top journal approximately 20 percent of the time.

4) published in a non-top journal almost 80 percent of the time.

What is choice 3? The far left bar of the graph pertains to social science studies that produced strong results. This bar shows that approximately 20 percent (or two full increments of 10 percent) of such studies were published in a top journal.
500
The word “friend” is used twice in lines 57-58 to

1) underline the importance of the narrator’s connection to Sempere.

2) stress how friendships helped the narrator deal with his difficult home situation.

3) emphasize the emotional connection Sempere feels to reading.

4) imply that the narrator’s sentiments caused him to make an irrational decision.

What is choice 3?

When, in the eighth paragraph, the narrator asks Sempere if the author Charles Dickens is a friend of his, Sempere replies, in the ninth paragraph, that Dickens is a “lifelong friend. And from now on, he’s your friend too.” Sempere designated Dickens a “friend” of both himself and the narrator, who had never heard of the author before. This signals that the use of “friend” in these lines is figurative and emphasizes Sempere’s emotional connection to Dickens and, more generally, to reading. It also signals Sempere’s hope that the narrator will come to have a similar connection to Dickens.

500
American Caleb Bradham invented Pepsi-Cola in 1893. It was first called this:

1. Caleb's drink

2. Brad's drink

3. CB's drink

4. Calbra's drink

What is #2 - Brad's drink? (It was renamed Pepsi-cola in 1898 after its ingredients Pepsin and cola nuts.)